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Ice on my brow

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Below is the poem entitled Ice on my brow which was written by poet ROSALYN LAMPKIN. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Ice on my brow

ice on my brow--
making Angels in the snow
with my best friend





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  1. Date: 11/18/2011 9:19:00 PM
    It depicts an entire scene with just a few special words, enjoyed reading your work tonight, Blessing dear Rosalyn, Vienna

    LAMPKIN Avatar ROSALYN LAMPKIN
    Date: 11/19/2011 5:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Vie, blessings to you as well. Rosalyn
  1. Date: 11/18/2011 9:40:00 AM
    Heavenly haiku! Peace & Love Matthew Anisjh

    LAMPKIN Avatar ROSALYN LAMPKIN
    Date: 11/18/2011 2:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Matthew for reading and commenting. Peace and Love to you as well. Rosalyn
  1. Date: 11/17/2011 3:15:00 PM
    this one was so sweet. Congrats on your win!

    LAMPKIN Avatar ROSALYN LAMPKIN
    Date: 11/17/2011 8:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Andrea, I wasn't sure if it would be ranked but it was. thanks Rosalyn
  1. Date: 11/17/2011 11:20:00 AM
    Congratulations Rosalyn on your win in this Haiku contest of Debbie Guzzi. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/16/2011 3:09:00 AM
    wow.. congrats... you did super.. i could never top.this... enjoyed..p.d.

    LAMPKIN Avatar ROSALYN LAMPKIN
    Date: 11/16/2011 5:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    first one ranked in the top 10....girlie, girl you know I am on top of the world with this.
  1. Date: 11/15/2011 3:00:00 PM
    wonderful imagery! Congratulations on your win in Debbie's contest. :) Catie

    LAMPKIN Avatar ROSALYN LAMPKIN
    Date: 11/15/2011 10:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Catie. My first haiku and I'm delighted that it ranked in the top 10. Rosalyn
  1. Date: 11/15/2011 9:46:00 AM
    Congrad's on your win great progress really wonderful image! Made me want to play too! Light & Love

    LAMPKIN Avatar ROSALYN LAMPKIN
    Date: 11/15/2011 10:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Debbie. I struggled with this one but I'm glad to know that it ws good enought to rank in the top 10 since it was my first. Rosalyn
  1. Date: 11/9/2011 6:31:00 AM
    Yes OK just you MUST use those two dashes after the word brow in line 1 [ice on my brow--]and in the title line you put the first line of the poem....

    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 11/9/2011 6:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    no capital [A] on [angels]
  1. Date: 11/8/2011 3:10:00 PM
    put line 3 back in 1st place and don't forget the -- after the word brow [when it becomes line 1 again] l & l

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 7:18:00 AM
    I am writing you because this has the making of a good haiku..print out the page from this link and review what you have written..line 1 could be a haiku it is 1 image..Line 2 could be a haiku it is a second image..this confusion is caused by omitting the -- which indicates the cut, please place it after line 1 http://sites.google.com/site/graceguts/essays/haiku-checklist

    LAMPKIN Avatar ROSALYN LAMPKIN
    Date: 11/8/2011 10:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Debbie thanks for the advice....I'm determined to get this haiki poetry forum down to a science....
  1. Date: 11/8/2011 7:18:00 AM
    soup mail

    LAMPKIN Avatar ROSALYN LAMPKIN
    Date: 11/8/2011 10:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Debbie I sent 2 message to your soup mail inbox. Again, thanks for guiding me with the haiku form of poetry. Rosalyn
  1. Date: 11/7/2011 11:03:00 PM
    You brought me a smile. :-)

    LAMPKIN Avatar ROSALYN LAMPKIN
    Date: 11/7/2011 11:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks....I too am smiling. This is the first time I've done the haiku version...I love trying various forms of poetry. Rosalyn
  1. Date: 11/7/2011 8:27:00 PM
    like this, can feel the frost; hot choc'lit on the way?

    LAMPKIN Avatar ROSALYN LAMPKIN
    Date: 11/7/2011 8:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I want some hot choc'lit too. Thanks for reading. Rosalyn