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Unspiritual Moment

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                                    Grits overflowing on a flat range top..

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  1. Dufresne Avatar
    Robert A. Dufresne
    Date: 11/11/2011 6:58:00 PM
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    yup... I would have sputtered out a few unsavory words there for sure !: ) love the title Sara
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    Carolyn Devonshire
    Date: 11/10/2011 9:52:00 AM
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    Thanks for your comments today. Your husband is copping out by claiming he did the cooking and the dishes when you went out to eat. Get him an apron for Christmas! Love, Carolyn
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    jack horne
    Date: 11/8/2011 12:10:00 PM
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    LOL, I can imagine this : )
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    binibining P.iNk
    Date: 11/7/2011 11:44:00 PM
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    haha! this sure is funny, wasn't expecting this, Sara but definitely an unspiritual moment! and eww fish & chocolate?? that must have been nasty! thanks as well for passing by my blog and poems :)
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    JSLambert Chinaski domo-MR.ROBOTO
    Date: 11/7/2011 2:33:00 PM
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    HA! Kiss my Grits FLO'! (Mel's Diner)
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    Edward McCormick
    Date: 11/7/2011 2:13:00 PM
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    Your poetic immortalization of an Unspiritual Moment here is inspiring! I love it! ~ECMc
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    M. Hussain Effendi
    Date: 11/7/2011 2:10:00 PM
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    I get it now, why the name that you've chosen for this one.
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 11/7/2011 12:40:00 PM
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    what;s cooking?? love the humor here,sara.. tops! :) huggs!
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    M. Hussain Effendi
    Date: 11/7/2011 8:05:00 AM
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    Care to shed some light, Sara???
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    Joyce Johnson
    Date: 11/6/2011 8:53:00 PM
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    Thank you for your comments Sara. I love hominy and I thought perhaps grits would taste like it. I tried grits just once in a restaurant and could not eat it. Maybe it wasn't cooked right. Love, Joyce
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    Kimberly LaRocca
    Date: 11/6/2011 7:57:00 PM
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    It could have been worse. The gas stove that my grandmother use to have would have been a lot harder to clean. Nothing like grits and fried fish in the morning, just showing my southern roots.
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    elizabeth wesley
    Date: 11/6/2011 4:07:00 PM
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    Grits!? What are they? Is it something you grind your teeth on?
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    Judy Ball
    Date: 11/6/2011 2:14:00 PM
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    Awwwww! There goes a nice pot of grits. Haven't had any grits in years being raised in Fla. and moved to Canada when I was 28yrs. old. They don't even know what they are up here. I learned to subsitute creme 'o' wheat for grits. A moving piece for a Southerner. God Bless, JB ;)
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    David Williams
    Date: 11/6/2011 2:09:00 PM
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    Sara i get the idea of the poem, but here in Uk i have no idea what grits are, they sound awful.. sorry..David
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    Catie Lindsey
    Date: 11/6/2011 12:35:00 PM
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    you are so right, there is absolutely nothing spiritual about overflowing grits! Cute and clever.
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    Wilma Neels
    Date: 11/6/2011 10:23:00 AM
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    lol, gosh I enjoyed this Sara, enjoy your Sunday :)
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    Carolyn Devonshire
    Date: 11/6/2011 9:05:00 AM
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    :) How do you get them off the range? Got a good laugh reading this monoku, Sara. Love and blessings, Carolyn
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    Russell Sivey
    Date: 11/6/2011 8:46:00 AM
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    Very descript. love your message. Excellent work!!
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    Michael J. Falotico
    Date: 11/6/2011 7:49:00 AM
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    LOL... smiles in a one line piece... luv Michael


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