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fortune seekers

leans against the pllow in pain,  pains of cultivated years wastes in vain, going to bed with everthing in trousers, not any man but those in executive trousers, that posh car ride. now posh aids ride, waiting for death to come. and death too waits for to come. years of hard work in undergraduate days, ready to compensate good coming days. now the cloud is dark. for unstoppable tears to embark, on the journey of eyelash wetting.

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  1. Date: 12/19/2011 9:19:00 AM

    Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Ibrahim. I hope to see you as a premium member in the new year. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/7/2011 5:08:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Ibrahim. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

  1. Date: 11/6/2011 8:15:00 AM

    VERY GOOD,IVY