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Love Story

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Love Story

It was the 3rd of November
When everything went down
He caught my eye
I caught his eye
Transcending space and time
We went up
And we went down 
On a joy ride
Thinking about each other
Getting tingling feelings
Deep inside
I told my friends
He told his friends
They meet each other at the ball court
And they make plans 
To hook us up
Down the block 
At the corner store
It was funny 
How it all went down
It'll give you some to think about
Specially when you so in love
So their ain't no other
Cinderella story that matches to mine
No their ain't no other 
Gaze that transcends space and time
See I've never felt this way inside
Specially for a guy like mine
I can tell this love story ain't gonna end
Baby

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  1. Date: 11/2/2011 5:03:00 PM
    * “Life Can Truly Mirror Fairy Tales Sometimes * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Keneathia * Yet Rare for The Many Is This Its Extreme Truths * When You Least Expect Something * Your Heart Explodes With Love * Owww, Like A Train Rushing Through Your Soul * Beautiful Once More My Dear * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *

    Brown Avatar Keneathia Brown
    Date: 11/3/2011 5:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    In the way you said this I can tell you are a true poet. I'm only 15 years of age and I love poetry and singing and also music more than anything. I wish I had the poetic personality you have. I look up to you. My Love Always, Keneathia:)