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six baby ducklings

six baby ducklings sailing behind proud mother... empty broken shells
seasonal--ducklings--spring Written: 31/10/2011 Margaret A Linton Lassie contest: strict haiku sponsor: Charles Henderson

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  1. Date: 11/16/2011 11:23:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in the Strict Haiku contest Margaret. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/13/2011 9:54:00 AM

    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 11/12/2011 2:36:00 PM

    charming image! Congrad's Light & love

  1. Date: 11/11/2011 11:50:00 AM

    Your last line here sure tied everything so well-- and I sure can imagine those duckling behind proud mama duck! Really charming! Super congrats on your win, Margaret :D

  1. Date: 11/11/2011 10:34:00 AM

    Nice picture you have painted here Marg.Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 11/11/2011 7:50:00 AM

    Margaret, congratulations on your 3rd place win with this wonderful Haiku. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

  1. Date: 11/11/2011 1:12:00 AM

    M..~;-) CONGRATULATIONS, WITH YOUR entry FOR CHARLES STRICK HAIKU *YIKKEEESS~lesson~ , I COULD NEVER PULL THIS OFF* Have a wonderful VETERANS DAY @;- GOD BLESS,..p.d.

  1. Date: 11/10/2011 8:24:00 PM

    Congrats Margaret on a terrific win for this spectacular Haiku luv..

  1. Date: 11/10/2011 8:16:00 PM

    Cute, very cute, marg!! I loved the picture you showed Congratulations.

  1. Date: 11/10/2011 2:10:00 PM

    Margaret~Talk about an AH-HA! Those empty broken shells really AH'haaaad me. YOu wrote such a powerful haiku...I am just learning this form and when I saw the word "proud" I was wondering if that were an emotion an animal has....I am so excited to see this one place so high in such a competitive contest! High 5, girl! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 11/10/2011 1:18:00 PM

    Marg--thank you for entering my contest. What a super poem. A wonderful 3rd place.

  1. Date: 11/6/2011 6:53:00 AM

    Awww, what a sweet haiku. Many congrats on all your wins too, my friend : )

  1. Date: 11/2/2011 9:05:00 PM

    Rereading this one: I love this and I hope it rates very high.

  1. Date: 11/2/2011 6:03:00 AM

    Wow looks like a winner Margaret. The best to you in the contest. Thank you for your always kind words on my writing. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/31/2011 6:51:00 AM

    this is a really cute entry for the contest, I like it a lot :-)

  1. Date: 10/30/2011 11:00:00 PM

    Lovely one to visualize.

  1. Date: 10/30/2011 10:25:00 PM

    Very nice, margy. I need to hurry and do one of these. they are filling up fast!!

  1. Date: 10/30/2011 10:11:00 PM

    Well written, Margaret. A strong, solid haiku here. Hope Charles likes this one too.