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a night of gloom

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a night of gloom

(I JUST FOUND THIS COMPOSITION OF MINE IN OF MY FOLDERS IN MY DOCUMENT..I WROTE THIS ONE WHEN I WAS ON THE VERGE OF NOTHING GOOD TO THINK AS I SUBMIT MYSELF INTO SO MUCH SADNESS...GOOD THING I REALIZED THAT SHEDDING TOO MUCH TEAR TO SOMEBODY WHO DOES NOT DESERVE IT IS NOT WORTH OF MY TIME) 


Lock in my room
I could feel the stabbing gloom

Darkness is eating me up
Good and bad thoughts have great gap

Unbearable pain
Turned tears drop like rain

I just couldn't find my right consciousness
It must have been washed away by sadness

Then this idea pop
Maybe it would make the agony stop

If i shed a blood
Would it make you feel glad?

If i have my last breath tomorrow
Would you care to know?

Well I guess not
Coz now i know i don't really mean a lot

Wish i could sleep by then
And hope not to woke up again

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  1. Date: 11/1/2011 8:01:00 AM
    millions of people suffer like this everyday. thank you for your pen it was most enlightening.

    amacio Avatar precious angelica amacio
    Date: 11/1/2011 11:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    tnx for liking my poem lisa...hope you dont get the same suffering i had when i was writing this poem...smile :))
  1. Date: 10/30/2011 2:18:00 PM
    this is really deep, and I can relate a bit... take care, enjoyed reading your poetry today.

    amacio Avatar precious angelica amacio
    Date: 11/1/2011 7:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    you take care too :D