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I. Bleeding -- a world without comfort -- lost without love -- no destination... silently walk without touching wounds... where is love? II. Frail fingers grope... sodden afternoons... winter fog... through gray eternity -- cold eyes, delicious mouth. Found love will laugh, desire returning. III. Making love, we deceived ourselves. Complicitors, we lied. Compliant pawns, we defied danger, practiced brilliant fabrication -- but truth was stranger. IV. Others know desire: ever changing years -- and lifetimes -- reaching towards the moon. Love, be my way.

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  1. Date: 1/26/2012 2:52:00 PM
    This poem seems to delve deeply into the Psyche and displays how our human frailties keep leading us in and out of a reality we don't desire to face. Yet love truly is the answer, whether sharing, giving or taking it. Sublime poem! Mahalo, Connie

  1. Date: 1/24/2012 8:55:00 AM
    A very interesting piece here... I added the extra word you suggested... ou were right. Thank you for the suggestion.

  1. Date: 1/24/2012 7:30:00 AM
    Thank you for your kind comments on my writings Leo. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/23/2012 7:36:00 PM
    enjoyed very much professionally written!! welcome to poetry soup my friend....if you have a strong stomach....stop by my poetical attempts....I had one of those little white pills and an energy drink today....be warned!

  1. Date: 1/22/2012 1:06:00 PM
    Very expressive and descriptive work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Your comments about my work was very uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 1/22/2012 10:58:00 AM
    Leo... it is a beautiful poem!!!oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 1/20/2012 10:16:00 AM
    Very nostalgic and romantic- lovely thank you, Bren : )

  1. Date: 1/19/2012 8:34:00 AM
    Your words made me think even more than I already do... I agree with jack horne - cleverly crafted piece. A great read!

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 6:23:00 PM
    a most interesting free verse from you as well, Leo.I really enjoyed the read!

  1. Date: 12/27/2011 1:55:00 PM
    Clever thought provoking piece, Leo

  1. Date: 12/22/2011 3:19:00 PM
    Lovely Leo,thank you. OXOX love Anne-Lise A peaceful Christmas to you Leo!

  1. Date: 12/20/2011 5:51:00 PM
    Leo...u know what? You are on my favorite's list and I am awaiting an encore from you...I really hope this note finds you well and that your holidays are bright. All the best in the upcoming New Year. Gwendolen

  1. Date: 12/1/2011 1:59:00 AM
    Very moving...

  1. Date: 11/17/2011 8:46:00 PM
    Fantastic one adorned a nice picture on love. Thanks for sharing. Sweet good morning. bl

  1. Date: 11/9/2011 6:40:00 PM
    I suspect something sad happened to take you away from these pages for such a long time. This poem seems to indicate that. Hope you are back with happier lines. Thank you for reading and commenting on mine. Love, Joyce