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Twilight

Measured gurgles perform off key
Accompanied by the sound of uneven breathing.
The nose breathes in--
The mouth breathes out,
Each distrustful of the other
To carry out the necessary task.

Gone are the soft down pillows 
Where sweet dreams gathered.
Now life requires a more upright position.
Her head propped high to let the air in.

A gnarled hand clutches a dinner bell
Whose dulcet tones belie its singular purpose.
One ring, two--but no one comes.
Complaints go unanswered,
And each day in the old house is the same.

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  1. Date: 10/28/2011 7:07:00 AM

    Thank you so much for sharing your poetry with us Beverly. I hope that you find continued inspiration that you may write and share your poetry for many years to come. Wishing you an amazing weekend. Love, Carol

    Crespo Avatar Beverly Crespo Date: 10/28/2011 8:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    As always, your coments inspire me. Thank you Carol.
  1. Date: 10/27/2011 12:26:00 PM

    A sad, and rather distressing situation...all too common, it seems. A nicely constructed poem, with good use of language.

    Crespo Avatar Beverly Crespo Date: 10/27/2011 12:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you.