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Dark Mistress

Date: 1/16/2013 10:16:00 AM

Love the imagery & passion in your written piece.

chipepo lwele

Date: 10/2/2012 9:35:00 PM

Unusual concept but fabulous write.

Date: 5/22/2012 12:57:00 PM

I do not believe this is fantasy. Depression that deep could never be trivialized, nor should it be. For me, there is too much real life going on to bother making things up. Thanks for passing comment on my own trip to the edge of the abyss of insanity. All the best , Jean

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/21/2012 4:36:00 PM

ha ha Nate, is that Suicidal with a (S) or Suicidal with a (me) he he he... lets both live in that abyss of insanity,, well you know what Albert Einstein said about "insanity"... anyways... , I'm liking the rhyming game Joyce cooked up herself! Congratulations with your awesome poem, take care :-) * PD

RALPH TAYLOR

Date: 5/19/2012 8:59:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Nathan. Excellent piece. Great job. Nice going. Ralph

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/19/2012 6:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Joyce's "Rhyming Game" contest Nathan. This poem of yours is deep my friend and I hope it is not true you have those bad feelings. Love, Carol (Tickle Tickle)

Terry O'Leary

Date: 5/19/2012 3:17:00 AM

Heavy... but nice... and congrats ... Terry

David Williams

Date: 5/19/2012 2:08:00 AM

Nathan congrats on your win..David

John Wulf

Date: 3/16/2012 10:34:00 AM

Thanks for visiting my poems. I am drawn to this write of yours in its familiarity. Unfortunately many suffer the affliction, often seeking solution in solitude. I tire of the inspiration from the dark side and write less of it than I used to, but somehow it never leaves. Hope you have many sunny days.

JSLambert Chinaski domo-MR.ROBOTO

Date: 3/9/2012 4:43:00 AM

nice stuff! I've written WaYYY too many of these!

M.I.A .

Date: 1/1/2012 7:56:00 PM

i was once in this place... A colorless void of grey... but old disciplines helped for me to keep moving, i guess. Wishing you the best in the new year Nathan, looking forward to see more of your soul :)

Sandy Mason

Date: 11/29/2011 12:34:00 AM

This poem is really well written. The rhyming is right on. Its not just bunch of abstract floating meaningless words. It tells a story of inadequacy of worth and rejection of reality in depth, with a lot of emotional feeling and visual words. It almost sounds like a rap song. Enjoyed reading it Sandy Mason

john aaron green

Date: 11/28/2011 12:08:00 PM

striking poem,,,,,this is a masterpiece,,of writing,,,thanks for reading my work in progress......

Asra Mir

Date: 11/28/2011 7:24:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this! Well done! Keep it up

M. Hussain Effendi

Date: 11/25/2011 10:11:00 AM

Very well written, Nathan. You were great with the rhymes too.

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 11/21/2011 8:28:00 AM

thought provoking poem - especially the lines "everything i believed to be good was just an evil misunderstood" very powerful lines. btw, thanks for your humorous comment on my fall haiku poem, lol :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/21/2011 12:51:00 AM

NATE.... I STOPPED BY JEFFRY'S POEMS... AND I CAN'R READ HIS POETRY.... IT HAS NO SENSORS....LOL..Often he stared into the emptiness of nothingness contemplating the beauty of its existence ...THAT POOR POOR JEFFRY,,,,

elizabeth wesley

Date: 11/20/2011 8:19:00 PM

Found Jeffry Cohan and didn't like his language or style.

elizabeth wesley

Date: 11/20/2011 7:34:00 PM

Quite a hard act to follow with this amazing verse. Depression affects most of us at times but suicide is way out and a final soution to be sure. Great verse! thanks for your visit, Couldn't find Jeffrey Cohen on Poem Hunter, Is there another place I would be able to read?

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/20/2011 5:02:00 PM

A charged write here Nathan,, i will come back to this to sift its message, and i am thankfull for the advice on Jeffry..! yours Joe.!

jeffry cohan

Date: 11/20/2011 2:05:00 PM

dis here dude can wrie! ~free cee!~ Pheepoetry

S. K. A. T.

Date: 11/6/2011 11:24:00 PM

Hi, let me see U have not answered my e-mail on NODDLES. My sis says your 2 cute 4 me 2 meet. Laughing at it. Joking. My hunny is with me Or else I'd be in your apartment kicking your ass at MK. Not really, I suck at it. U & my sis have problems, ALL I'm gonna say is take care of yaws, Tendencies, that is. Take care nate, LOVE SIDNEY

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/28/2011 6:26:00 AM

Thank you so much for sharing your love of poetry with us Jakitz. I hope that you find continued inspiration that you may write and share your poetry for many years to come. Wishing you an amazing weekend. Love, Carol

DON JOHNSON

Date: 10/28/2011 2:02:00 AM

Very bloody deep n good, seeking answers as you should, well done here mate....Don

bl devnath

Date: 10/27/2011 9:10:00 PM

Nice write about suicidal tendencies. Thanks for your comment on my write. bl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/27/2011 5:26:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this one..Some people face some very difficult situations in life..Reads like you know and understand about them..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work about the drug bust..Sara

Linda-Marie SweetHeart

Date: 10/27/2011 2:09:00 PM

last stanza is priceless jakitz.. and super positive luv.. this entire poem is fascinating poetic art.. thankxx luv for so many sweet comments on my writes.. much appreciated.. how are u????

Robert Walker

Date: 10/27/2011 1:49:00 PM

now that was well thought out

Dan Kearley

Date: 10/27/2011 11:49:00 AM

Very nice wording in this poem.It flows Great.But the sad meaning of it has struck a cord in my head.Which means a poem is now brewing.Hang in there....

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/27/2011 10:13:00 AM

Things happen and depression can do many things and suicide is one of the dark paths for some. But there is a bright world out there that is waiting to be embraced but sadly depression can not let the sun shine in. Very descriptive poem you have penned. love phyl

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