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Figment

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Figment

Figment:

She walks here often, almost every day
She thinks of him
And each day he will appear
With a different name, a different face, 
But always,…. the story will be the same…..

His skin will be bronzed by the sun
Wet and glistening by the tide 
He will not tell her his name
Instead, he tells her she is beautiful

The sand scalds her shoulders and thighs
She will let him have his way
He will talk with his hands
He tells her she carries passion in the little hallow of her back
 
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        Truth:

        Her walks along the beach
        And into the brambles 
        Are never without purpose
        She thinks of how he may be watching
        She is pleased to hold
        Her head tilted slightly downward
        If, while she continues
        Into the wildflowers and thistles
        With her clothing open
        With her skin borne
        To foxtails and thorns
        Letting them enter her flesh…..
        She will of course admit
        Astonishment, …….but no shame…
        And promises herself not to return again
        For at least a week

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For Cyndi's Contest: Sensual

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  1. Date: 3/2/2013 10:06:00 AM
    My hearty congratulations on your awesome win my dear friend Carrie! A great write indeed! Thank you so much for sharing! Love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 8:00:00 PM
    Carrie, :-) congratulations with your sweet and spicy win in Cyndi's out of the box" SENSUAL POETRY. ADULTS ONLY." Contest* Always & Forever ~LINDA

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 6:21:00 PM
    Wow deep Carrie..all in the sex, your biggest sexual organ is your brain! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 6:00:00 PM
    Wonderful poem, Carrie. very sensual indeed. Congratulations on your win in Cyndi's contest. Hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 9:55:00 AM
    Carrie! : ) The mailman! : ) I love it! Sensuality and passion at its best! Congratulations on your win! Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 8:27:00 AM
    Tall and tan and young and lovely---brings memories---by the way, could she carries passion have a double meaning Carrie!!

  1. Date: 11/3/2011 6:00:00 PM
    Wonderful poem. Congratulations on your first place win.

  1. Date: 11/3/2011 6:49:00 AM
    Wonderful write,Carrie.Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 11/2/2011 6:49:00 PM
    tittilating ;) congrad's light & love

  1. Date: 11/2/2011 4:32:00 PM
    oh wow, what a TART! love me some tarts, Carrie, you never cease to amaze me, congrats! namaste~N

  1. Date: 11/2/2011 10:23:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Frank's "Erotica" contest Carrie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/2/2011 10:05:00 AM
    super congrats Carrie on another wonderful win luv..

  1. Date: 10/27/2011 12:58:00 PM
    * “Beautiful * Makes Me Think of Cotton Candy * Sticky & Sweet * Sooo Lovely * Hugggs & Kisssses * Sarah.” *

  1. Date: 10/27/2011 8:41:00 AM
    Seriously impressive write, Carrie. Many congrats on your wins too, my friend : )

  1. Date: 10/26/2011 7:34:00 PM
    You have penned this one with the dicta of an artist. I wish to see it on the top of the list so I can read it again. xxxVie

  1. Date: 10/26/2011 6:46:00 PM
    Smile, *^_^* “I Would Fave Your Precious Beauty A Thousand Times If I Could My Dear Priceless & Beautiful Carrie Richards! * In My Minds Eye This Is You * And Owww, How Very Stunning You Are * Like A Dream * I Love Your Beauties Poetry *^_^* Especially When You Brush In Such Soft Colours & Yesss, I Could Feel This Painting Stirring My Spirit, Unto Its Very Depths * Beautiful In Faves!” === My Love, Always, Jasper *

  1. Date: 10/26/2011 6:36:00 PM
    Wow Carrie, this is quite the poem(I almost called it a story), I enjoyed it immensely!! I especially liked your division between Figment and Truth! What is or is not reality! Wonderful write!!