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can not sleep

in the morning i cannot eat,
because i think of you.
at lunch i cannot eat,
because i think of you.
at tea i cannot eat,
because i think of you, 
and at night i cannot sleep,
because im hungry...........x

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  1. Date: 10/26/2011 5:19:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be Dean. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

    wood Avatar dean wood Date: 10/26/2011 5:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you carol your words are very kind and inspirational. im finding my feet not just in poetry but in life too ( are we not all lol). many thanks again and god bless
  1. Date: 10/26/2011 5:13:00 AM

    hilarious.very nice.