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LOOK IF U REALLY DON'T DIG MY TITLES BAMBI WILL CHOOSE ONE

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LOOK IF U REALLY DON'T DIG MY TITLES BAMBI WILL CHOOSE ONE

      ANYBODY GOT ME A COT?

So here’s the problem as I  see the situation
No one ever looks around  too well
Survey the area and it will lead to information
Then follow me, because I found the map to Hell

I mean if  you ask me that’s where everyone is bound
Name  me one person you know who never sins
So I  searched up and down, on the landscape and the ground
Now follow me because this is where the madness begins

It begins and ends with fire, heat and unbearable screams
And I’m telling you  to get ready for the fire
However remember,to  prepare yourself for nightmares and never any dreams
Because Hell is reserved for every sinner, sucker and liar

In Hell ain’t nobody got no cot, no hammock nor bed
And I tell you to look around at every man, woman and child
Keep the fact that you’re going to Hell firmly planted in your head 
Especially those who take shotguns and kill Bambi in the wild
          Phreepoetree ~free cee!~

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  1. Date: 10/25/2011 8:01:00 PM
    Ain't nobody got no cot!...You are funny!How did all that hellishness get back to Bambi in the wild....WOW!!! From what I've read Hell is not the place you want to go to.It's not some kick a$$ party or anything.Nothing but sorrow&pain,sorrow&pain,pain,pain,pain!

  1. Date: 10/25/2011 5:42:00 PM
    I agree. I saw an albino dear once in a Pittsburgh forest, It was awesome. I can't imagine anyone taking a shot at that. It was an experience of a lifetime. Blessings, Vie.