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I Love You

In summer night when the sky is blue
When in hearts passions ignite
When the clouds shower a sprinkle or two
When desires brighten the darkness of night

When in the skies the stars wink
When butterflies sleep and night bird’s awake
When fountains flow with serenity’s drink
When the sound of breathing, the silence break

When thoughts are dressed in colorful gowns
When the breeze is pregnant with love’s fragrance
When the time in the lake of enchantment drowns
When in ecstasy the whirling Sufis dance

When my soul in agony of despair writhes
When swords of loneliness are out of sheaths
I care not whether false or true
Whisper in my ears, “I love you”
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  1. Date: 1/1/2013 2:15:00 PM
    Mohammad , making an appearance on the soup today. Only 2 wish you this coming year to be a glorious one in which rewards all your future poetry with success. I love the time I took out of the first day of the year. 1-1-2013* :-) Just to wish you the best of 2013. Take care my dear poet friend. PD

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 1/2/2013 7:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks PD for your very thoughtful New Year Greetings. I am deeply touched. May 2013 bring for you all the joy in the world and sun shine of love and welbeing. May you have a happy, productive and prosperous New Year. Love
  1. Date: 3/15/2012 1:01:00 PM
    "I care not whether false or true".........many times have I had this feeling..........you captured a raw emotion very well.......amazing work really

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 3/17/2012 12:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Jennifer for reading my poem and your amazing comments. You have captured the true spirit of my poem. The lines demonstrate the desperation.
  1. Date: 2/6/2012 8:55:00 PM
    I think love poems move me the most and yours is so much so. It has a gentleness and seems to dance between the lines. Thanks for sharing your gift. :)

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 2/7/2012 12:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Dear Elizabeth, I am thrilled to read your views about my poem. Your going over my poem over and over again is an overwhelming evidence of your heartfelt appreciation of my poem, I am grateful. God Bless You. -Mohammad
  1. Date: 1/16/2012 6:17:00 PM
    started reading from poets i never searched before and you are my first. this piece,so filled and saturated with true feelings of love. heavy and deep emotions that take peoples mind on a journeyand make us lost in our own imaginary world. absolutely wonderfully written! i look forward to reading more

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 1/17/2012 10:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    What a tremendous tribute, Jasmine. You have turned me from nobody to somebody. I appreciate your highly uplifting comments. You are spoiling me. -Mohammad
  1. Date: 12/29/2011 10:21:00 AM
    This is so very lovely my friend. Beautifully spoken and so filled with deep emotion. Well Done. God Bless , JB

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 12/29/2011 11:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Dear Judy, Thanks for your heartwarming comments on my poem. You are very kind. Happy New Year. -Mohammad
  1. Date: 12/4/2011 5:35:00 PM
    Exquisite and eloquent. Thoroughly enjoyed, Mohammad. Beautifully written...will fav. this. Have a great week! Love, Annalise

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 12/6/2011 2:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Dear Annalise, Thanks for your most precious comments. I am thrilled -Mohammad
  1. Date: 12/4/2011 10:50:00 AM
    I will keep this poem in my heart,lovely! OXOX Anne-Lise from winter Norway

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 12/6/2011 2:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Dear Anne, Your comments have touched me deeply. Thanks a million. -Mohammad
  1. Date: 11/27/2011 5:49:00 PM
    I enjoyed your poem Mohammad, many wonderful verses present here, hugs,vie

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 11/28/2011 5:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Dear Vienna, Thanks for your heart warming comments. I am deeply moved. Best wishes. -Mohammad
  1. Date: 11/26/2011 6:17:00 PM
    So full of emotion and energy. I feel like dancing to the melody of this lovely verse. P S Such a nice picture of you my friend!

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 11/27/2011 5:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Elizabeth for your uplifting comments. You have made my day. -Mohammad
  1. Date: 11/7/2011 11:20:00 PM
    Breathtaking write. Such beautiful imagery and mastery of phrases to personify nature. You inspire me.

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 11/10/2011 6:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Taha for your heart warming appreciation. These compliments mean a lot to me.
  1. Date: 11/3/2011 2:16:00 AM
    Whoever u wrote this for should be swept off her feet...lovely as a rose with morning dew.... Gwendolen

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 11/3/2011 8:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Gwendolen for your touching comments. You are very kind. -Mohammad
  1. Date: 11/1/2011 6:25:00 PM
    If I can sum this up in one word: beautiful!!! Always, Laura

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 11/1/2011 6:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Laura. I like your summing up -Mohammad
  1. Date: 10/29/2011 6:10:00 PM
    So passionate of a write..Very romantically penned..Enjoyed reading..Sara

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 10/30/2011 7:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Your encouraging comments have given me great joy, Sara. Thank you so much. -Mohammad
  1. Date: 10/29/2011 5:03:00 AM
    WoW! this piece really shows the depth, the diversity, the experience and the maturity of a poet's heart. very beautifully written sir

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 10/29/2011 5:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I am grateful to you Mia for your awe inspiring comments. You are so kind. -Mohammad
  1. Date: 10/28/2011 6:31:00 PM
    Nice use of rhyme and imagery in this poem. Thank you for sharing it with us and for your kind comment. Have a good weekend. Karen

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 10/28/2011 7:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Karen, for your heart warming comment. You are very kind. -Mohammad
  1. Date: 10/25/2011 4:58:00 PM
    Mohammad this is a glorious emotional write luv.. such visual analogies take the reader's breath away and it is mesmerizing and haunting in presentatiion luv.. thankxx for your sweet critique on my contest entry ..much appreciated...

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 10/25/2011 5:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I am thrilled to read your comment, Lindas. I am sooooo.... grateful for your enchanting words. -Mohammad
  1. Date: 10/25/2011 10:45:00 AM
    I need to keep this in mind... especially on my blue days...Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem,, Take care,..P.D.

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 10/25/2011 5:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your most encouraging comments. You have made my day. -Mohammad
  1. Date: 10/25/2011 10:28:00 AM
    When I read this, I am transported into all the beautiful places you describe. Romantic with that special touch of emotion that moves the reader. Very special my friend.

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 10/25/2011 5:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Elizabeth! Thank you soooo.....much for your appreciation of my poem. I am indebted to you for your kindness. -Mohammad
  1. Date: 10/25/2011 8:42:00 AM
    I love this poem. It spreads its own beauty while we read it... I love your poems, Moh.

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 10/25/2011 10:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Dinda, for your charming comments. The beauty is in the eye of beholder. I am grateful. -Mohammad
  1. Date: 10/24/2011 6:21:00 PM
    True poetry here Mohammed. I very much liked it. I am glad you made your kind comments on my latest so that I could find you. Love, Joyce

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 10/25/2011 9:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for reading my poem and for your encouraging comments. Have a nice day. -Mohammad
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