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apple diet

Eat it
Drink it
Love it
Keep fit
French gala apple keeps me healthy
Apple byte makes memory wealthy.

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  1. Date: 11/23/2011 8:26:00 AM

    Such a sweet way to keep healthy. and you tell it with panache babe. :)

  1. Date: 11/9/2011 5:20:00 PM

    this is very clever! wow.

  1. Date: 11/6/2011 3:28:00 PM

    I read that the seeds are full of good stuff too. But I agree, apples are the best!

  1. Date: 10/31/2011 11:54:00 AM

    Butter, peanut butter, apple butter toast. You mush up the apples and put em' in to roast. Put in sugar and cinnamon, that's all you have to do. I know from years of eating this that it is good for you. My Mom used to make this almost every fall. She recently passed away and so my Dad and I made some. It's a little taste of heaven from her that feeds my soul.

  1. Date: 10/26/2011 6:11:00 AM

    I have apple cider in my car.. lol... i'm to lazy to get it down... hehheheh! well I don't think much about apples... no wonder my memory never serves me right,...take care,..p.d.

  1. Date: 10/24/2011 5:36:00 AM

    I am so happy to see the Soup back up and thrilled to be able to read your wonderful poetry Yasmin. May you have an exciting week filled with new found inspiration. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/24/2011 4:21:00 AM

    A cool and clever write, Yas! Apples are so versatile...you can even make good poems with them~lol! xoxo Robert.

    Zzzzz Avatar Zzzzz Zzzzz Date: 10/24/2011 11:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hmmm...my wife visits the doctor quite a lot. Should I be worried?
    khan Avatar yasmin khan Date: 10/24/2011 6:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    eating and writing hahaa!stimulation of the brain cells with apple a day keeps the doc away but if the doc is one hell of a handsome bugger!
  1. Date: 10/23/2011 2:25:00 PM

    I removed the "" so just search What My Eyes See Now under my name... sorry

  1. Date: 10/23/2011 2:17:00 PM

    I stink at tyburn form but had entered Dr. Ram's contest bc I like to always give him support.I don't think there was a form that frustrated me more!... This poem is outta sight, Yasmin! I was right,..a lil spoof on the Apple Diet,....this is suuuuuuperb, darling. Just superb! I haven't read lots of your work, BUT...when I am off next weeek, I will stop by and visit many of your poems. All the best girl....cool Steve Jobs poem too!! Gwendolen

    khan Avatar yasmin khan Date: 10/24/2011 6:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yeah!thanks Gweny!
  1. Date: 10/23/2011 8:49:00 AM

    ps. Steve Jobs would like this one as well..

    khan Avatar yasmin khan Date: 10/23/2011 10:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    He is not around Davidoff!
  1. Date: 10/23/2011 8:47:00 AM

    Aren't apples the forbidden fruit?

    khan Avatar yasmin khan Date: 10/23/2011 9:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Forbidden for Adam and Eve,not for us!
  1. Date: 10/23/2011 8:47:00 AM

    hey yas, can't beat English Cox apples.. thanks for your comments, your right can't beat the real thing, ha ha ha ..David

  1. Date: 10/23/2011 8:22:00 AM

    The old addage is true "an apple a day keeps the doctor away"..My son says that apples makes Psoriasis worse..I don't believe him..Enjoyed reading your work..My son is still Physical Therapy..I think that it was set up for four weeks and he has done maybe three..I am still not as well as I would like to be but I have hopes of getting better..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 10/23/2011 6:55:00 AM

    So truue my dear Yasmin, try Honey crisp apples if they are avl near you.... They are delicious....Nice to be reading you on my sunday morning....luv Michael