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My Pain


  For in my burden i cry,

its depression can only lie.

  My failure is just my flaw,

a side affect from the law.

  My anger is at my pain,

to hinder me of my reign.

  For i am a chosen one,

a believer of our Gods son.

  So try to slow me down,

for in him always a crown.

  His faith is forever in me,

his vengence is what you'll see.



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  1. Date: 10/23/2012 2:50:00 PM
    I guess by now we know that pain is an integral part of life. It hollows us out to hopefully be filled with something better. Would love to think your life is coming back together John. Love, Elizabeth

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 6:17:00 AM
    Good morning ,John..stopping by to greet you with a happy fathers day.... God bless..pd

  1. Date: 12/26/2011 11:28:00 AM
    this was beautiful.. cory

  1. Date: 12/7/2011 9:23:00 AM
    You have the confidence of your Savior, John...so strong the words of your spirit. Some days I feel more spiritual than others...He is the same today, tomorrow, and 4ever though. I love that the most. ....Jack is ACTUALLY JESUS...now go RE-READ the poem...silly! Gwendolen

    green Avatar john aaron green
    Date: 12/7/2011 9:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you gwen,,,i wish everyone knew the authority we have in him.............
  1. Date: 12/5/2011 8:48:00 PM
    I liked the line about anger at your pain. I have that anger too with new pain I'm experiencing. But we all need to realize we are chosen sons and daughters of God and to have faith!

    Rix Avatar Gwendolen Rix
    Date: 12/7/2011 9:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    great truth-- :)
  1. Date: 11/30/2011 11:58:00 AM
    your words are so beautiful here john ! I always enjoyed reading ur poems...ur words have a beautiful and divine connection with the lord !

  1. Date: 11/7/2011 6:48:00 PM
    I really liked this one. I could feel the faith you have.Nice write.

  1. Date: 11/7/2011 10:36:00 AM
    thank you for your compliment, *blushes* I enjoy your poetry as well. very well penned

  1. Date: 11/6/2011 8:05:00 AM
    u are so kind John to read my poetry and leave sweet encouraging comments my friend.. always anxious to read your dynamic words also.. creativity is the spark to glorify God who has given us our gift of poetry luv.. happy Sunday...

  1. Date: 11/4/2011 10:37:00 AM
    You might like my poems "One Wish" and "Blind Ambition".

  1. Date: 11/4/2011 10:26:00 AM
    Your strength and determination show well here in this poem.

  1. Date: 10/29/2011 8:23:00 PM
    I like the entire write, but, these lnes are very powerful....My failure is just my flaw.... My anger is at my pain..for in him always a crown....very powerful lines.

  1. Date: 10/29/2011 4:06:00 AM
    do your THANG bro!

  1. Date: 10/28/2011 12:34:00 PM
    Sos true. so special John. I love how your faith shines through your verse. An inspiration to all of us my friend. :)

  1. Date: 10/27/2011 11:34:00 AM
    John so good to read your work again!! Uplifting as always. I can identify with your line 'My anger is at my pain, to hinder me of my reign'. I was angry and realized not at anyone ,just the pain . And said ,He doesn't give more than I can handle. Wonderful message here! Anne

  1. Date: 10/25/2011 8:50:00 AM
    My failure is just my flaw,~~ <--- I love this line... I wish, I could go on all day,, with that in my mind... I love your ending as well... I'm glad you know how to handle pain.. God bless you,..p.d

  1. Date: 10/21/2011 9:22:00 PM
    Very nice!