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peace sun

I woke up this morning and said a prayer for you,
the sun shines through my blinds and it's a shame i can't be there with you
your heart beat creates earthquakes,
your tears bring the rain,
and for the second time it has flooded here again
I'm sorry if i disappointed you,
I'm sorry if i ever lied,
because what i'd do to go back would mean
i could reverse the time that you died.
sick to my stomach i can't bear the thought,
but when the sun shone through this morning
it brought a peaceful thought back to my heart
through out each day i kneel down and pray
and know you're living in the sky
I try making wishes from stars flying by
but the sight must be quicker then the blink of my eye
i'll never know why,
til it's my time to go,
I look around this city realizing all friends are faded foes
I can't hold on, i hold it within,
it is my faith in peace that keeps me from disintegrating within.

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  1. Date: 3/5/2012 6:02:00 AM
    Such powerful & emotional lines, especially the last two. Fantastic. I noticed you haven't posted anything new in awhile...you should. :)

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 11:59:00 AM
    Paradox. Your poetry is a challenge. I like that. Love, daver

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 7:34:00 AM
    I am stopping by to thank you so much for your kind comments on my poetry. I enjoyed reading yours today. Have a wonderful day and please continue sharing your poetry G T. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 9:53:00 PM
    beautiful writing...is that your own work vienna?

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 9:41:00 PM
    She lays there still behind the sun Holding still to the beating of my heart Behind the veil the eyes that loved Be still my heart and know The beauty to have loved and lost Better then not to have loved at all. Love and light, vie

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 9:10:00 PM
    Thank you for taking the time to read Lisa :) This poem was dedicated to a good friend of mine whom passed away at a very young age not too long ago. I have found that Writing poetry is a lovely way to work through the hardest times in life. Again Thank you for the feed back

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 8:11:00 PM
    such sad poetry :) glad I stopped in for a peek!