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The Bathroom Peeper

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The Bathroom Peeper

Lured by the light in bathroom, 
The bathroom peeper comes,
Prowling through the layers of darkness.
Seeing two paws clinging on the window bars
Of secrecy, or a pair of hot eyes
Burning through the holes of lust,
A village virgin whoops,
When the bathroom peeper slinks away.

As the hot sun rays warm the canal ,
He hides in the bushy banks,
Throwing his blue eyes in to the distant nudity.
Sometimes, he is seen being chased
By the rustics with bamboo sticks.
But quick oblivion is a bliss,
And he gets duty bound again.

Hiding is a risk
But peeping is a pleasure.
Through the twigs and bars,he stares
At the other side of pleasures.



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  1. Date: 11/17/2012 7:28:00 PM

    I remember this..hopefully someone has taken care of this naughty man LOL [soup mail] Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 11:25:00 PM

    Bathroom peepers are not unique to your country Fabiyas...we do see a few around as well, although, for the life of me I can't see what they get out of seeing someone else naked...I like your play on words, a good write! Congrats on your win. One love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 6:41:00 AM

    Congratulations on your super win in Lisa's "Dirty Deeds" contest Fab. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/7/2012 1:23:00 PM

    luved the topic"olinjunokkuka" gr8 one ..............~sashi

  1. Date: 4/5/2012 6:49:00 AM

    I like your poem very much Fabiyas. Very different and great ending. Congratulations on your win! :)

  1. Date: 4/4/2012 11:37:00 PM

    what an interesting tale, Fabiyas. Big congrats for you in the contest.

  1. Date: 4/4/2012 1:43:00 PM

    congratulations on your win. very interesting poem. Mike

  1. Date: 4/4/2012 7:00:00 AM

    I remember this one! congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 4/3/2012 10:02:00 PM

    FAB, Congratulations with your awesome poem, in Nathan's contest.. Have yourself a good night. :-) , luv~PD

  1. Date: 4/3/2012 11:21:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Nathan's contest Fab. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/3/2012 8:57:00 AM

    Congrats on your win, Fab. Excellent. Nice going. Ralph

  1. Date: 4/3/2012 8:50:00 AM

    Congrats Fabiyas on your win this made me smile hugs vie

  1. Date: 4/3/2012 8:21:00 AM

    congrats, ;-)

  1. Date: 1/3/2012 7:33:00 PM

    that little sneak! In my head he is laughing hee hee at his naughtiness as the villagers chase him. great picture you created here. enjoyed :)

  1. Date: 11/14/2011 9:33:00 AM

    Over here, we have this saying that whenever a guy gets a sty in his eye, it's because he's been a peeping tom... Very interesting poem here, Fab-- btw what is the title of your kite poem? Thanks for dropping by mine...

  1. Date: 11/11/2011 11:10:00 PM

    i thought it was an animal since you used paw, but read your comment below and i was right! it was an animal! (sort-of) @_@ LoL I enjoyed though, your poem, the words are sublime ;)

  1. Date: 11/11/2011 11:20:00 AM

    a village virgin whoops OR the villages virgins whoop..I liked this one alot...the boor was there again? is it a booring person? or do you mean boar? again I recommend staying in present tense.

    M V Avatar FABIYAS M V Date: 11/11/2011 9:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Debbie.The article 'a' has been added.For avoiding confusion I have changed 'boors' as 'rustics'.
  1. Date: 10/22/2011 1:13:00 PM

    Ooh, I couldn't help but think of Bigfoot (perhaps even a werewolf), Fabiyas. Love the mystery surrounding this "peeping" encounter. Awesome, Fabiyas! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 10/20/2011 9:50:00 PM

    What an unusual way to write about a peeping Tom (we call them peeping toms. I don't know why) do they say bathroom peeper in your country? A very interesting poem, Fabiyas.

  1. Date: 10/15/2011 9:11:00 PM

    Ps. Smile, *^_^* “Twas Passing Back By The Neighborhood to Say Thank You for The Kind Visit, My Dear Precious & Priceless Fab! *^_^* Happened to Notice Your Beauties Clarity Note Below & Yesss, I Figured It Was A Truths Tale Sooo, Girls Beware Whenever Your Lovely Lights Step In The Showers *^_^* You Never Know Who Could Be Sitting In The Peep Shows Front Row *^_#* Especially, At The Bates Motel!?” === My Love, Always, Jasper *

  1. Date: 10/15/2011 1:12:00 PM

    The poem is based on a real fellow who does no other job except bathroom peeping.It is a kind mental disorder I think.Our villagers know bathroom peeper.I know bathroom peepers are there in many villages.I don't know whether bathroom peepers are there in other countries.What is portrayed in the poem is reality though it is comical.Thanks to all who commented on the poem.

  1. Date: 10/15/2011 10:51:00 AM

    Smile, *^_^* “Makes Myself Think About An Old Television Series for Some Reason Called, `The Ghost & Mrs. Muir` *^_#* That Naughty Ghost Because, I Know He Was Doing A Lot Bathroom Peeping *^_^* I Bet She Knew It Too??? *^_#* Just Having A Bit of Fun My Dear Precious & Priceless Fab! *^_^* Hmmm, I Wonder If The Tables Were Turned * What Those Pretty Ghost Would Look Like, My Dear *^_^* Stay Beautiful!” === My Love, Always, Jasper *

  1. Date: 10/15/2011 10:14:00 AM

    Doesn't read like a very nice fellow to know..A different kind of work about life that happens in our world..Thanks for stopping by..Sara