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Death Call

Nature's alluring call
in deep sleep of death
wailing night fades to bleak

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  1. Date: 10/13/2011 7:34:00 PM

    Nice use of imagery and alliteration. Keep on writing. Karen

    Nwaorgu Avatar Timothy-Paker Nwaorgu Date: 10/25/2011 4:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks a bunch Karen! i shall do as said.
  1. Date: 10/13/2011 11:40:00 AM

    Thoughtful write, everyone dreads death but the pain of death fades with time.

    Nwaorgu Avatar Timothy-Paker Nwaorgu Date: 10/25/2011 5:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    In my country there is a saying that says "nobody wanna die but everyone wanna go to heaven". that was my thought exactly.