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Sometimes

Sometimes when people talk about her,
I have to bite my tounge, I have to do this before
I lose control.
I have to stay silent, but yet try to tell them the
real reasons why she did what she did, many ppl 
don't like her, but I love her. I have every since I was eight years old, 
does that make me a whore too?

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  1. Date: 10/12/2011 11:58:00 AM
    I like how you withheld who she was until the end - made it very dramatic and powerful, especially by ending it in a question. nicely done :)