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fruit crush

tongue ripening me peeling me in peach-sweet heat stroking starfruit skin your berry-burn lips circle strawberry nipples hardening to pips juices sating me pulped fruits of passionate need your love's quenching seed

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  1. Date: 3/24/2013 1:40:00 AM

    Fine metaphor and alliteration , but it ends too quickly, like it happens at times..lol;) Jag

  1. Date: 11/7/2011 6:21:00 AM

    A belated congratulations I am sending you for your win in Michael's "A Kiss Like Fruit" contest Charlotte. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/6/2011 5:05:00 AM

    Congrats Charlotte on a fantastic win with this fruity delicious luv yummy .. tasty one..luv..

  1. Date: 11/5/2011 6:55:00 AM

    congrats Charlotte on your win.Creatve write here.Enjoyed.

  1. Date: 11/4/2011 8:30:00 PM

    Yours was by far the most erotic anyway! Congrats on the winners list, you naughty good poet!

  1. Date: 11/4/2011 3:03:00 PM

    Congrats and thanks so much for supporting my contest and for writing this sweet tasty piece...... always Michael

  1. Date: 10/28/2011 3:30:00 PM

    * “Victorias Secrets Come to Mind for Some Reason Amid This Completely Beautiful & Arousing Verse * Your Beauty Rises Far Beyound The Images In This Although * My Dear Beautiful Charlotte * Pulped Fruits, Peaches, Strawberries, Juices * Be Still My Beating Heart * Mesmerized * Luv * Sarah.” *

  1. Date: 10/13/2011 11:38:00 PM

    passionate picture of waiting delight. does it have the hope of my burning fright? with all the hope of a burning light. and all the hope of a love so bright. burning with such a desire. that after burns with an ember fire.burns continuous into the night. waiting for your breathe to burn it bright. i wait,i wait, long into the night.

  1. Date: 10/12/2011 8:51:00 PM

    Smile, *^_^* “Yesss, I Agree Absolutely With All Three Coms Below My Dear Precious & Priceless, Blessed & Beautiful Charlotte! *^_^* Two Read Throughs Do Not Seem to Quite Quench The Buds But, I Doubt That A Dozen Would Either Yet Ow, What Joy to Try *^_^* Fantasima My Dear &, Thank You, for Your Lovely Beauties Com; Very Kind!” === My Love, Always, Jasper *

  1. Date: 10/12/2011 1:52:00 AM

    oh, my gosh, way beyond kisses and HOT as a senryu can be. Off the charts, Charlotte and superbly done!(the middle one is amazing)

  1. Date: 10/11/2011 8:13:00 PM

    oh, i like this one, charlotte!.. really tasty;) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 10/11/2011 7:27:00 PM

    second read...cooled down enough to say - WOW!