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Then I Can Die

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Then I Can Die

If all I did  was made you feel so real
Among aortas of much needed love
With silky shoulders of stern Pacific layers
Disturbed by memories of wings...

If I defected life and accepted  wrinkles
Of heated rhythm in tempera of love
Although the shyness of a maiden wouldn't vanish
I long to get to know you in your destined life...

If all I did was made you stop and watch me 
Smiling from a frame of wooden Jacaranda wonders
Then I can die forever in immortality of love -
The Anonymous -
                        in the "Wax Museum of 
                                                  the Hoping Souls"...

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  1. Date: 12/30/2011 8:05:00 PM
    this poem spoke to me the words i long to hear. from women my age who did'nt give up on love. women who don't think that i think that they are attractive but they are and if they are single then i am active. beauty is in the eye of the beholder. let me judge if your much too older. let this new sexual revolution begin for the older and senior citizins.

  1. Date: 11/6/2011 7:17:00 AM
    I have enjoyed this write, also congratulations on your featured poem Iolanda

  1. Date: 10/30/2011 7:26:00 PM
    This was quite beautiful...your are a talented poet! Thank you for you kind comment on my poetry! ;) Always, Laura

  1. Date: 10/23/2011 1:20:00 PM
    Your a really good poet iolanda. Thank you for stopping by my poetry.Love,Vie

  1. Date: 10/11/2011 4:08:00 PM
    Beautiful wording, Iolanda. YOu have such an eloquence in your poetry! I just can't catch up here. I am grabbing snatches of time and I am getting more and more behind. I should have started on page two. haha. well, I am off to tutor my lady (she pays my gas money!!) after school. LUv ya, andrea

  1. Date: 10/11/2011 1:33:00 PM
    makes me shiver good...

  1. Date: 10/11/2011 9:23:00 AM
    A highly inventive and lyrical poem. Very good indeed!