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About This Poem

Star Sugar

Oh, scattered flecks that sparkle light

like crystals emptied from a bowl

to dust the skies from some great height!

Oh, scattered flecks that sparkle light,

you sweeten up my somber night.

Delight the lone and searching soul,

oh, scattered flecks that sparkle light

like crystals emptied from a bowl.

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  1. Kendrick Avatar
    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 5/9/2013 10:32:00 AM
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    Congrats on this great win about those great stars..Sara
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    Red OMara
    Date: 5/7/2013 10:50:00 PM
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    Congratulations, Andrea. Another typically beautiful offering. You flatter the stars. - Red
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 5/7/2013 10:02:00 PM
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    ANDREA, a nice winning poem once again.... PD
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    Jack Jordan
    Date: 5/7/2013 6:36:00 PM
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    Beautiful work! Congrats on your win. Much deserved... Jack
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    Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/6/2013 9:38:00 PM
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    Beautiful Andrea, loved reading it. Congratulations, see u...Love Terry xoxoxo
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    Carrie Richards
    Date: 5/6/2013 7:19:00 PM
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    You are the star on the top of the Soup!! You shine!!!
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    Abdul Malik
    Date: 5/6/2013 3:57:00 PM
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    On second thought, maybe, I would say ...like crystals emptied from a Cauldron! Have to cover a very large area, you know.
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    Abdul Malik
    Date: 5/6/2013 3:38:00 PM
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    "..like crystals emptied from a bowl" very imaginative! I should have written this line. Nice write.
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    Ray Dillard
    Date: 5/6/2013 12:21:00 PM
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    One star-gazer to another, I love your poem. RAY
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    Caleb Smith
    Date: 5/6/2013 5:58:00 AM
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    Congrats on the win, Andrea...sweet like suga'...I love it!
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    Afroze Ali
    Date: 5/6/2013 1:22:00 AM
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    I like how soul and bowl rhyme. who would have thought but you...congratulations again
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    Connie Marcum Wong
    Date: 5/5/2013 11:27:00 PM
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    Wow Andrea. You have magic powers to be able to enter so many contests and keep up on so many replies. A real beauty with this win and in first place. Kudos!
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    Donna Jones
    Date: 5/5/2013 10:21:00 PM
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    Oh Andrea...the title alone is a great poem....congratulations
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    Joyce Johnson
    Date: 5/5/2013 9:14:00 PM
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    Very nice Andrea. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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    Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/5/2013 12:02:00 PM
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    Hello Andrea, really a very well deserved win amazing. Goes to fav. and a 7>>>>> see you later. Love Terry xoxoxoxo
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    Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/5/2013 12:02:00 PM
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    Forgot the the 7>>>
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    Reason A. Poteet
    Date: 5/5/2013 11:31:00 AM
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    The triolet fomr lets you emphasize the description of "your" stars - sparkling flecks of light. You build on a well-turned phrase - sweetness and light. I enjoyed it. Congratulations.
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    Alfred Vassallo
    Date: 5/5/2013 8:29:00 AM
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    A Well deserved win. A talented lady does not deserve less!
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    S. K. A. T.
    Date: 3/7/2013 11:14:00 AM
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    nice Andrea~Yours truly *SKAT
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    craig cornish
    Date: 3/6/2013 8:49:00 AM
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    Andrea, beautiful and even with the repeating lines it didn't feel that way and flowed together wonderfully. Great job with the form!
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    Carrie Richards
    Date: 3/2/2013 8:59:00 AM
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    Such a lovely triolet, Andrea.....this one sparkles just like your personality! Congrats!!
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 3/1/2013 9:09:00 PM
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    Andrea, thank you very much for considering my 100 % nature contest..Congratulations in showing off Natures true after glow, always~ PD
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    Charles Clive
    Date: 1/29/2012 3:42:00 AM
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    Wonderful. I love it. A beautiful piece, congratulations. Charles.
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    Cecilia Macfarlane
    Date: 1/25/2012 8:09:00 PM
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    A sparkling win Andrea....congrats!
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    bl devnath
    Date: 1/24/2012 9:46:00 AM
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    Congrats on your win for this lovely work, bl
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 1/23/2012 2:51:00 PM
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    Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 1/23/2012 11:44:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your super win Andrea. Love, Carol
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    Robert Pettit
    Date: 1/22/2012 8:01:00 PM
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    Congratulations on your win with this entry. I'm going to have to try this method.
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    Charlotte Puddifoot
    Date: 1/22/2012 5:16:00 PM
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    congrats on your 1st place win with this sweet treat, love the image of the stars as sugar crystals :-)
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    Carrie Richards
    Date: 1/22/2012 9:24:00 AM
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    Love it, Andrea! You have sweetened up the night!!
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