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ETCHED

Enemys throughout, the day they very met fighting tooth and nail,with both warrior hearts dominance of the town,being the ultimate prize hatred adding fuel,enlighting inferno to prevail. My best pal from knee high,would rather do without the confrontations hanging on him i will call the oppostion shaun, although fine with me thriving fear,bullying yet an awesome stature. The fatal night in question,etched in many minds a long long fight ended,my pal oblivious towards a knife was placed into his hand,while recieving extreme beating lashed out,everything stopped,pal overcome with relief. At court not guilty verdict,the jury did return on the basis of harrassment, and all that it entailed. Yet families effected,can see it from both sides loss and freedom,though my pal lives with everyday.
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  1. Date: 10/11/2011 4:22:00 PM
    Very interesting to read. Yes, it is etched on their hearts!! Even with that not guilty verdict. Good luck in this contest if it is not judged yet. LUv, andrea

    Beadnall Avatar Paul Beadnall
    Date: 10/14/2011 6:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks alot Andrea,no it hasnt been judged yet.Blessings from Paul.
  1. Date: 10/8/2011 11:17:00 PM
    Paul, a very interesting poem.. the image is deep,,, a very strong thought,.,, take care,..p.d.

    Beadnall Avatar Paul Beadnall
    Date: 10/8/2011 11:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks very much,appreciated n blessings from Paul.
  1. Date: 10/8/2011 11:12:00 PM
    enjoyed reading!

    Beadnall Avatar Paul Beadnall
    Date: 10/8/2011 11:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Doris appreciated with blessings from Paul.