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Savior

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Savior

You are my children
I will wash sin from your feet
Your faith carries thee

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  1. Date: 2/27/2009 9:58:00 PM
    The first line reminded me Flannery O'Connor's short story: "A good man is hard to find" This is a great Senryu, Xavier. Even though I personally do not like archaic words, when you used "thee"as the object of a verb meaning "you", the closure of this piece increase the intensity of its emotional message. Ruben.