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Hearts at War

hearts at war revolver to skull echoed hate chambers emptied 9-1-1, "May I help you?" His seed in hell's womb Written for Russell Sivey's Relationship Breakups Contest~~Shadorma Form~~ By Gwendolen Rix 10-7-11

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  1. Date: 12/11/2011 5:44:00 PM
    very deep,,you brought down heaven and earth on this one,,it does echo so many things in a life......

  1. Date: 10/12/2011 7:13:00 AM
    soup mail gwen

  1. Date: 10/11/2011 2:35:00 PM
    Stark naked hate. Bullets in the brain is a relationship killer. Love the poem.

  1. Date: 10/11/2011 11:27:00 AM
    oh dang, that is just powerful, Gwendolen-- this is just so tragic and heartbreaking :( -- and no fair-- you changed your name without telling my secretary?! lol

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  1. Date: 10/10/2011 5:07:00 PM
    That is a hard hitting poem right there! Well, written, Sunny's Girl...

  1. Date: 10/8/2011 3:43:00 PM
    wow what a tempestuous write Sunny's Girl..I so like your new moniker... good luck..I think this one was judged today.. will go check the list..congrats if u did win my friend.. and.. Ron was very impressed with my Cupie Doll poem..haha.. he is shy sometimes.. when I do this writing about him.. but a 'bear' in business..haha... see my new blog today luv..

  1. Date: 10/8/2011 3:29:00 PM
    nice one

  1. Date: 10/8/2011 11:10:00 AM
    Beta Alpha Tau is BAT. Smart ass that I am, I thought it fit your poem. Oh yes! That blood-spattered telephone. Yes, hate is probably the greatest evil. Luck in the contest. Love, daver

  1. Date: 10/8/2011 10:22:00 AM
    Oohoohoo! WoWzers! There is so much pain and feeling in this. A great entry for the contest. Good Luck. God Bless, JB

  1. Date: 10/8/2011 5:05:00 AM
    A powerful write indeed!Best wishes.

  1. Date: 10/8/2011 2:50:00 AM
    Wow Gwendolen, that was really powerful. Great write, good luck in the contest, it should do well. Lee

  1. Date: 10/7/2011 7:33:00 PM
    Gwendolen, it's hard to read. I know that it's supposed to be and it is. Tony

  1. Date: 10/7/2011 7:31:00 PM
    wow, what a tragic one!! well, it's the most powerful one I read yet!!

  1. Date: 10/7/2011 6:24:00 PM
    ouchymonga! yeah, i believe i'd move on from that one, too. whadda po, Gwendolen, bow to ya~N