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Couples

(18/09/2011)

Love is identical with couples
Paper spread its space when the pen needs to settle a scribble
When the dust get bored, wind will show-up and blow
When the sun is stressed, rain will come as thunders brattle
When fire is too emotional, ash reminds him to set low

Can they get along forever?
When the paper full filled, pen will leave it
When it’s blown, wind will forget where the dust thrown
After refreshed, the sun will shoo, rain is harassed
When the ash takes control, spots of fire in black dust merely crawl

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Pasangan

Cinta identik dengan pasangan
Saat pena tertoreh, kertas membantunya
Saat debu sedang bosan, angin meniupnya
Saat matahari kelelahan, hujan menggantikanya
Saat api terlalu emosi, abu memperingatkannya

Namun mampukah mereka selalu berdampingan?
Saat kertas terisi penuh, maka pena akan meninggalkannya
Saat debu tertiup, akankah angin kembali menemukannya?
Saat matahari bugar, hujan diusirnya
Saat abu menguasai, api hanyalah hitam debu

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  1. Date: 10/15/2011 10:29:00 AM
    Poetry at it's best Dinda, a joy to read this Saturday :)

  1. Date: 10/10/2011 7:26:00 AM
    This is your best work to date!!! Wow my dear sweet friend.... I am in awe with you wonderful tallent and skill as a true Poet... love and hugs Michael

  1. Date: 10/7/2011 3:45:00 PM
    nice poem..you were on point

  1. Date: 10/7/2011 2:58:00 PM
    way to go!!! You nailed this poem.. I love it!! thanks for all your comments on my work always greatly appreciated.. free spirit

  1. Date: 10/7/2011 1:16:00 PM
    this is a really excellent poem. i love the imagery and the emotions it invokes in me. love the way you made the sun and rand and fire and ash and wind and dust and poetry all dance together P.D.