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Poet Destroyer A Date: 11/21/2012 10:08:00 PM NATE,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -
Debbie Duncan Date: 9/8/2012 1:28:00 AM very cute,,,,, don't think they are haiku's though,,,, I posted a few,,,, Debbie Guzzi read them then explained to me. Though I think your poem/ words are very cute ;}
Nathan A. Date: 5/11/2012 10:37:00 AM sometimes my poems turn chocolate with out the smell' I can't help but post it anyways :-) Thank you everyone
Black Eyed Susan Date: 5/8/2012 9:36:00 AM nice dichotemy of colors/purity against the mud - are you saying that's what's really underneath? dirtiness? so many ways to take this :)
Joe Maverick Date: 4/4/2012 9:42:00 PM Enjoyed the "basic quality" of this Nathan too many complications in life dectract from my inspiration i find, glad to have looked you up..)
Date: 11/24/2011 1:18:00 PM Nice use of imagery. Keep on writing and sharing your words. Happy Thanksgiving. Karen
Gwendolen R. Date: 11/20/2011 4:31:00 PM I caught on to the neopolitan ice cream almost immediately not knowing it was an entry for PD's contest....nice poem and full of great nature. Gwendolen
Sara Kendrick Date: 11/20/2011 1:27:00 PM I would think that the snow could create some muddie slush..We don't experience much of it here in the south so I don't know what happens when it is as much as people experience up north..Enjoyed reading..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..The comments were uplifting..Sara
Date: 11/20/2011 11:23:00 AM Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
kash poet Date: 10/28/2011 3:59:00 AM An interesting write.Leave the reader pondering.Enjoyed very much.
Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/28/2011 12:37:00 AM Hey, I see this won the contest Congratulations!
Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/27/2011 10:45:00 AM are you ill boy.... I'm picking up lots of sexual images with this write....
Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 10/7/2011 8:04:00 AM Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Neapolitan Ice Cream (Haiku)" contest Jakitz. Love, Carol
frank herrera Date: 10/7/2011 3:16:00 AM You Did well! Congratulations!
Linda-Marie SweetHeart Date: 10/7/2011 12:41:00 AM Congrats jakitz on first place win with this yummy treat luv..
Lee Ramage Date: 10/6/2011 10:32:00 PM Well done, congratulations Lee
Margaret A Linton lassie Date: 10/6/2011 9:49:00 PM Congratulations Jakitz, A very clever haiku, step by step to the bottom layer. well done....Margaret
Gwendolen R. Date: 10/6/2011 8:44:00 PM Oh,, how I savor the flavor of melting icecream....ahhhh...just a divine win for you. Congrats from an ice cream lover!
iolanda Scripca Date: 10/6/2011 8:18:00 PM Congratulations on your big, big win!!! Well-deserved!!!
Carolyn Devonshire Date: 10/6/2011 1:52:00 PM Well you really did get nature into you haiku, Jakitz. Bravo! Congratulatiions on your first-place win. Best wishes, Carolyn
John Wulf Date: 10/6/2011 12:50:00 PM Yes, the mud prevails, I see it; like the pink and white peaking and teasing before melting into perfection. Congratulations!
Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/6/2011 11:26:00 AM DEAR ~ JAKITZ ;-) CONGRATULATIONS!!! p.s.~Thank you for your #1 in my ice cream haiku,,,, Enjoyed the way you meshed sweetness and nature into muddy Revelations.. LMFAO)),, have yourself a nice and wonderful day,,, GOD BLESS,..P.D.
Debbie Guzzi Date: 10/6/2011 10:49:00 AM Very interesting short versemy new friend and YES you can laugh at my haiku about getting poked in the eye BUT humour is best labeled a senryu here's a 1 page list which will help you alot. What you have labeled haiku are not ;). http://sites.google.com/site/graceguts/essays/haiku-checklist
elizabeth wesley Date: 10/5/2011 10:51:00 PM Sounds like something tasty. Perfect neopolitan of course!
Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/5/2011 4:06:00 PM this is cute, like a little story resulting from it. Adorable title!
Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/5/2011 9:40:00 AM sweet surrender you stay alley calico ,, patting purring tom cat.... i'm not even gonna say how stupid you are,, only beacuse you are here on the soup... okay babe~ babe~ babe~ babe~babe~~babe~babe~ babe~babe~babe babe~babe~ ~babe~babe~ babe~babe~ spam.. spam.. spam.. spam... spam... spam... babe you make me smile... good luck in my contest,, and thank you for the support,..love xoxoox ~always ~SKAT