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Life Passes By


dark green lotus leaves
soft throne of the old bullfrog
life passes by

04/10/2011
By- Tahera Mannan
Theme-Lily pads and frogs.

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  1. Date: 1/25/2013 7:12:00 PM

    This is good, very good.

  1. Date: 5/22/2012 8:55:00 PM

    This is outstanding. One of the best! Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 5/21/2012 7:21:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Sidney~LeeAnn's "Lilly-pads and Frogs" contest Tahera. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/21/2012 12:23:00 AM

    Tahera,, congrats with your wonderful froggy win.. enjoyed reading your poem tonight~xox~PD

  1. Date: 5/20/2012 3:55:00 AM

    Tahera congrats on your win..David

  1. Date: 5/20/2012 2:50:00 AM

    TAHERA, Congratulations;-) & Thanks for supporting my contest~ :-)

  1. Date: 2/18/2012 10:05:00 PM

    I still remember this one. Love it still

  1. Date: 12/25/2011 10:43:00 PM

    Tahera,awonderful haiku, thank you for sharing.. May the magic of writing fill your days here on the soup. May all your dreams come true this holiday season. I hope you are enjoying the blessings that Christmas brings.. filling our hearts with hope and joy, just take care of yourself... once again enjoyed your poem,,always,..p.d.

  1. Date: 11/13/2011 10:31:00 AM

    When one looks at frogs, they do appear just to be passing the time of day. Fine Haiku Tahera < I'm fine by the way, thank you kindly for asking > :)

  1. Date: 11/2/2011 10:23:00 PM

    been awhile hon!... a shining ku with good use of the consonance L... love the turn of the last line... winning's bet, tahera! :) huggs!

  1. Date: 11/2/2011 6:31:00 AM

    Beautiful haiku...have you left the soup Tahera?

  1. Date: 10/27/2011 6:05:00 PM

    green lotus leaves/ the throne of an old bullfrog/ time passes/// I think I would link line 1 and 2 and change your line 3 which is a mental construct, rather than a sensory perception. Excellant observation.

  1. Date: 10/22/2011 1:07:00 PM

    Superb haiku, Tahera! I love the deeper meaning behind it. Bravo! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 10/21/2011 4:58:00 AM

    Enjoyed reading this one and envisioning the scene..Thanks for stopping by..Soup is back up..Sara

  1. Date: 10/21/2011 12:22:00 AM

    I am sitting on a park bench beside this pond.....gorgeous image here. gwendolen

  1. Date: 10/8/2011 8:22:00 AM

    Sweet and deep,Tahera.I enjoyed it this evening.

  1. Date: 10/6/2011 12:17:00 AM

    wow Tahera. What a great haiku this is. I really like it!

  1. Date: 10/5/2011 9:03:00 AM

    Thank you for supporting my contest Tahera. Love, Carol