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I Fall in the Fall

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I Fall in the Fall

I Fall in the Fall


It was between dry and rainy 
season here
When you breathed early fall’s 
weather sphere

Love visits in a weird way
When you were far, I had nothing 
to say

Now you almost near, I think I 
jump my heart
Is this really a good start or only 
cupid's random dart?

You make me hold my breath, dear
When you suddenly appeared, I 
cried a tear

The intimacy communicates with 
my feeling
My heart’s fence starts crackling

I’m asking about fall, you’re 
Never mind, as you’re here, I can 
feel the leaves falling

By: Dinda Minardi

Inspired by Michael J. Falotico's 
contest 'Falling in Love in the Fall'

Submitted for Nathan D. - "Best of 
the Best - Poem" Contest.

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  1. Date: 10/26/2011 6:50:00 PM
    How I wish.. fall would make me fall... He he he... Very cute... Hope u did well in the contest... P.d

    Minardi Avatar Dinda Minardi
    Date: 11/17/2011 9:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, dear P.D. :)
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    Date: 10/26/2011 6:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Wait... I see u did well in the contest... Congrats..
  1. Date: 10/12/2011 8:07:00 PM
    That last line is so special, it gives a great conclusion to your special verse.

  1. Date: 10/8/2011 8:37:00 PM
    A very lovely poem, Dinda. Congratulations on a deserving win in Michael's Contest. Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 10/7/2011 4:41:00 PM
    My dear sweet Dinda you have spilled your heart through out this wonderful piece..... congrat my dear,,,,luv Michael

  1. Date: 10/7/2011 4:30:00 PM
    Congratulations on the win here Dinda..

  1. Date: 10/7/2011 7:58:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Michael's "Falling in Love in the Fall" contest Dinda. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/7/2011 12:04:00 AM
    Lovely poetry, I must apologize for taking so long to congratulate you but i have been having problems with my internet and also with ps down, I am really delayed. My apologies. Lee

  1. Date: 10/6/2011 3:42:00 PM
    congrats on your win in the contest. free spirit

  1. Date: 10/6/2011 1:33:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win dinda! i like how your hearts fence starts cracking and how you can feel the leaves falling :)

  1. Date: 10/6/2011 12:03:00 AM
    Congrats Dinda on an exciting win with this brilliant beauty of outstanding expressions..luv.. superbly penned..luv..

  1. Date: 10/5/2011 8:04:00 AM
    I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Dinda. Love, Carol