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Going Halloween Haiku Crazy

"GOING  HALLOWEEN  HAIKU  CRAZY!"

McDonald's ~~
army of darkness~~
agony tears of a clown~~ 
creepy kid smile ~~
      **
KILL JOY~
rejection outlay~~
spell-caster demon terror ~~
assassination ~~
      **
EXPERATION~~
Ivory mountain grave~~
skeleton terror of doom~~ 
where's the buffalo?~~
      **
BEAUTY~~
Sky full of beast~~
relevant nights of velvet~~
entwine by her bliss~~

 

~by;p.d.   

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  1. Date: 11/17/2011 10:32:00 PM

    lemme see if you're online....

  1. Date: 11/17/2011 11:14:00 AM

    Ijustlovethatsallmylove

  1. Date: 10/9/2011 8:31:00 AM

    The last Stanza is exceptional pd, it wilds up so many images, purr purr. Have a wonderful Sunday :)

  1. Date: 10/7/2011 5:17:00 PM

    well this has put me in a Halloween mood PD my BFF ..especially enjoyed EXPERATION.. my fav.... OK where is that playboy bunnie costume now? have a great weekend ... your BFF..luv..

  1. Date: 10/7/2011 5:06:00 PM

    hey PD how are u....is getting close to the candy night and I bet the dentist love it.

  1. Date: 10/7/2011 3:29:00 PM

    happy happy birthday hugs again!! byee for now...send me my waffles...

  1. Date: 10/6/2011 4:55:00 PM

    oh, hey, I see it is your birthday today?? AWesome. LIbras are the greatest.

  1. Date: 10/6/2011 4:48:00 PM

    haha, Irma. That first one was my favorite of the bunch. What a creepy fun costume a Ronald McDonald one would make. Soupmail

  1. Date: 10/6/2011 3:29:00 PM

    Yeah Ronald McDonald is creepy-- well I find clowns creepy. period. And that's fun to be halloween haiku crazy-- hopefully it is contagious so I can have some of that... well advanced happy birthday to you pd :D!! Have extra birthday waffles :D happy birthday hugs to you!! It's your birthday over here anyhow ;)

  1. Date: 10/6/2011 3:13:00 PM

    A great Haiku series you created, dear PD! Thanks for you comment and Bday wishes too. Happy Birthday to you too! Love, iolanda

  1. Date: 10/6/2011 1:02:00 PM

    i actually had a small ronald mcdonald doll when i was little. i was always a little scared of him, that he'd come to life and attack me. he sure was creepy! i'm hanging in there, how are you doing?

  1. Date: 10/5/2011 10:48:00 PM

    Great descriptions luv, the last verse especially held me spellbound. interesting form of poetry, I can't seem to get my mind around most of them.

  1. Date: 10/5/2011 10:09:00 PM

    I really could feel the 'horror' in this! specially that creepy kid smile, reminded me of daimon all over again. greatstuff PD

  1. Date: 10/5/2011 10:06:00 PM

    hmm... particularly dig the experation. Pretty interesting po here. just read it three more times, now will deal with the captcha harangotan. beautimosity wished your way~N

  1. Date: 10/5/2011 3:38:00 PM

    PD - I just saw your comment on Alexa's "Sore Losers" poem and left a comment on yours. I think you'd be a gracious loser. Give yourself some credit because it's due. Now go ahead and enter some contests! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 10/5/2011 1:24:00 PM

    Super creepy Destroyer, good job. Perfect for Halloween. I also wanted to say that in my last poem that you commented on "The poets" I was wondering if when you said "I wish there are other things we could stop" what you meant but when I reread the poem I realized it might not really make sense to say you could stop a mechanic or a sailor. Kinda dry comparisons lol

  1. Date: 10/5/2011 10:21:00 AM

    i would call you babe but everyone seems too i would say i love you but everyone seems to what to say then that you haven't heard to get your attention

  1. Date: 10/3/2011 7:46:00 PM

    Mystical, magcial ried by way of haiku. Love & Peace Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 10/3/2011 4:23:00 PM

    Smile, *^_^* “Nice & Spooky This Fitting Tribute Unto All Hallow Eves Dawning Upon The Threshold of The Day of The Deads Soon to Be Arrival ';' My Dear Precious & Sweet, Priceless & Lovely Linda! *^_^* I Could Feel The Chills Running Through My Haunted Spine As I Read ';' As If I Were Upon Some Acid Trip & Trapped Amid The Maze In The Shinings RedRums Room of Leather Face Memoirs Part V ';' OooO *^_^* Ow, You Go Girl * Also, Thank You, for Your Beauties Kind & Lovely Visit, My Dear &, `Haiku Me Crazy!`” === My Love Unto You Always & Forever, Casper *

  1. Date: 10/3/2011 3:58:00 PM

    love this selection of haikus, PD. Hope you're having a great week - I'm good, thanks : )

  1. Date: 10/3/2011 3:29:00 PM

    That McDonal's clown has always sruck me as creepy too, PD. On Halloween the skeletons and demons are out in full force. Enjoyed reading. I am glad to be able to call you my friend. It was someone else who created the scuffle and I harbor no ill will. Actually, I get a kick out of your poetry and you have a place in my heart as well. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 10/3/2011 11:22:00 AM

    There is a Very Scary picture in every line. Nice one P.D

  1. Date: 10/3/2011 10:10:00 AM

    Nicely done Linda. That seems like Halloween alright. You get all manner little scareys then. Good job. God Bless, JB

  1. Date: 10/3/2011 9:02:00 AM

    Interesting Halloween work..A time to dress up and not be recognized..Sara

  1. Date: 10/3/2011 8:58:00 AM

    Did ya see the PD poem listed???? check it out, gurlie!! G.

  1. Date: 10/3/2011 7:27:00 AM

    as always wonderful what you write, harry

  1. Date: 10/3/2011 3:11:00 AM

    Hubble, bubble, toil and trouble. This haiku is unlike any other. Good write, the picture was well painted.

  1. Date: 10/3/2011 12:43:00 AM

    Clowns weird me out big time!! We have a haunted clown forest here that is about 15 plus dollars to experience....I skip it every year!! Hairy Cary Scary Mary!! Love the first one the most. You got the knack. I wrote a poem for you.....Not SCary! ha ha. Gwendolen

  1. Date: 10/2/2011 9:29:00 PM

    Enjoyed your haiku p.d, especially the first one, clowns really give me the creeps since I read Stephen King's IT. Your contest should be fun ~ Sharon x

  1. Date: 10/2/2011 8:45:00 PM

    this is the subject of my next contest... not out yet..lol.... coming soon.... "GOING HAIKU HALLOWEEN CRAZY!"