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Below is the poem entitled See See I can do it too which was written by poet Vino Venitas. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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See See I can do it too

Words elevated to a dazzling height
Silently answering perfections plight

Love strung together to make a sentence
Hate molded to become a pen

Time yields to patience
Rage bows to zen

Transcending a mind
A unique voyage just to find

That my pain is not my own
The dark is not for me to own

A star sits in a dark corner weeping
Its light flickering, its tears beckoning

Waiting to be rekindled, be reborn
Its essence weakened, its passion torn

Unable to help, my flame long since extinguished
But her whispering screams need to be relinquished

My history a possible remedy to her heart breaking agony
So I slowly open scars I closed indefinitely

I bleed memories and thoughts, hoping her tears will stop
Synchronized … as her tears and my blood drops

For every memory, a tear is traded, for every thought the corners of her mouth move up a inch
The darkness recedes as her light increases

Her tears slowly transform into pieces, pieces of poetry
Convincingly showing my blood a forgotten beauty

… I smile …

Sometimes the dark holds a star waiting to soar
People see it as scary, but the dark, yes the dark has so much more

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  1. Date: 5/22/2012 7:08:00 AM
    Yes it does, you take passion to new heights, you did it again hugs vie

    Venitas Avatar Vino Venitas
    Date: 5/23/2012 5:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you, I really preciate that
  1. Date: 10/22/2011 5:57:00 PM
    You have a lot of talent, I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.. feel free to let me know when you have another poem up.. welcome to PS. Take care

    Venitas Avatar Vino Venitas
    Date: 10/24/2011 5:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for your comment, Ill keep you posted
  1. Date: 10/3/2011 10:53:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Vino. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol