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The Sound of the Fiber

Although they called me a Flake with some Trix

I say " Cheerio(s) !" -  with my puckered lips

Grabbed my golden spoon

Jumped in a balloon

Kellogg's and I fly  to eat some Mueslix...



for Poet Destroyer's Contest "Your Favorite Cereal"

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  1. Date: 10/13/2011 10:04:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Favorite Cereal" contest Iolanda. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/9/2011 12:10:00 PM

    Congratulations on the win in the contest of P.D., Iolanda

  1. Date: 10/9/2011 11:48:00 AM

    Iolanda, Cool Limerick. Congrats on your worthy poem. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 10/9/2011 1:39:00 AM

    Gosh, you got a lot of cereals into this one, sweetie. How are you? And congrats on your cool limerick's win.

  1. Date: 10/9/2011 12:30:00 AM

    DEAR ,IOLANDA , CONGRATULATIONS! ;-) THANKS FOR SUPPORTING MY CONTEST, WITH YOUR FUNNY cereal LIMERICK,..ALWAYS,..P.D.

  1. Date: 10/8/2011 4:33:00 PM

    loved this.

  1. Date: 10/6/2011 9:07:00 PM

    Hey now, Iolanda...you MUST PICK ONE as your favorite cereal. ha ha..... You must eat cereal for all 3 squares a day like me. Great fun....love the image of you and Kellogg's flying away.....problem with your poem tho......there are no port-o-lets in a hot air baloooooon, oh nooooooooo!! Hold back on your fiber!Trouble might ensue! ha ha. Love, Gwendolen

  1. Date: 10/3/2011 11:59:00 AM

    Yes the sound of fiber is hitting the pit of the stomach at the moment along with a coffee. Trying to be a regular gal. ha ha. Love your poem. Phyl

  1. Date: 10/3/2011 1:23:00 AM

    Many thanks, dear Iolanda, for recommending me this amazing poetry site. I love your fresh visions and style. Greetings from Romania, Constantin

  1. Date: 10/1/2011 10:57:00 AM

    tasty and delich, iols.. what a number! :) huggs, nette