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Sunset Picture

As the sun moves down and sets behind the distant trees, You take a deep breath, the perfect time of day, if you please. Shoulders relax as you sit and reflect on the hours gone by, Evening approaches as the day ends and you breathe a sigh. The sky changes colour from warm yellow to pinkish mauve, Supper is done and the dirty dishes are still sitting on the stove. Don’t work through this picture, you don’t want to miss the glow, The shine on the river, the reflected shadows make time slow. Not only is the world most beautiful now but without the sun, It signals that if its been a bad day, it is now officially done. Sometimes in the summer, its a perfect time to take a drive, Makes you feel good, singing and driving, just glad to be alive. You anticipate the oncoming evening because it holds your private time, Where you can take a bath and soak, that feeling of calm, so sublime. Sundown reminds you that repairing slumber time will soon be here, Tomorrow, same feelings but the picture changes throughout the year. Written by Lee Ramage September 30, 2011 For Nette Onclaud’s contest “In 24 hours” Placed 3rd

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  1. Date: 10/16/2011 12:24:00 AM

    Dear Lee, Congratulations on YOUR POEM "Sunset Picture" recieving 3rd place Glory in nette onclaud's Contest "In 24 hours" Vivid Picture of Sunset I live on a Mountain and see the most Beautiful Sunsets and (Sunrises) I thank-YOU for YOUR response to my blog, a very wonderful Career YOU have choosen, My deepest Respect for YOU As I have only just met YOU I would like to say "Welcome to the SOUP" With LOVE, ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege. ..HG

  1. Date: 10/9/2011 4:43:00 AM

    Congratulations Lee. Sundown, a time to put the cares of the day behind or to relax and recall a good day. Lovely work Lee....cheers Margaret

    Ramage Avatar Lee Ramage Date: 10/9/2011 1:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Margaret.
  1. Date: 10/8/2011 2:38:00 PM

    Congrats Lee on a dynamic win with grandiose poetry superbly penned luv.. great piece..

  1. Date: 10/8/2011 11:54:00 AM

    A wonderful time of day for sure, when nature is hushed. congratulations Lee. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 10/8/2011 9:07:00 AM

    "It signals that if its been a bad day, it is now officially done." Oh, the satisfaction of knowing it is over. Smile. Unique line Lee. Relates me back to my days on the road as a truck driver. There are many bad days when your living is made by driving a truck. Congratulations on a top three. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 9/30/2011 10:39:00 PM

    very interesting,,, feeling is believing, and feeling alive,, comes with all sorts of changes... enjoyed,..p.d.

  1. Date: 9/30/2011 10:27:00 PM

    Nice Picture you painted, nice poem!