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You Look

You look
At the girl you thought
Thought you once knew
YOu look
Deep in my heart
And see how much agony was built up
You look
At someone you can no longer love
At one that is now lost forever
You look
But yet
You do not understand
You look
But in the end
You watch me as I am in a corner
Crying
Like i have never cried before
Knowing you lost the one you have always wanted

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  1. Date: 9/30/2011 6:46:00 PM

    Strong deep write on loss.. LOve shouldn't be that hard or hurt that much.... just my 2 cents... Michael

    Uchacz Avatar Summer Uchacz Date: 9/30/2011 6:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    but yet for me it does, and i don't know why