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To Be With You

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To Be With You

I would relinquish myself
To live inside your skin
And derive all my joys and pleasures 
Amid the boundaries within.

I would absorb your pain and strife
For all  my natural life,
Then gather myself up unobserved
To live inside your skin.

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  1. Date: 10/31/2011 9:20:00 AM

    I like the way you say things.

    Crespo Avatar Beverly Crespo Date: 10/31/2011 9:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sorry.
  1. Date: 10/31/2011 8:38:00 AM

    Great poem. It got under my skin, never mind my mind.

    Crespo Avatar Beverly Crespo Date: 10/31/2011 9:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I like the way you say things.
  1. Date: 10/30/2011 7:27:00 PM

    Wow. This was very awesome! Such devotion and such passion! Absolutely tears at the heartstrings. Always, Laura

    Crespo Avatar Beverly Crespo Date: 10/30/2011 8:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Laura, this is my favorite poem. I'm glad you found it. Bev