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Mind of a pesimist

Shakespeare brought good to life
Human nature to find the person deep within
Every man for himself
Humans of individuality all so different
Be stronger upon now
The path of a different way lays before ourkind
Community cut; slices our artery of connection
No need to associate ourselves
In times association sourced survival
Once weak and nor wise - we die
In times it masks of false happiness 

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  1. Date: 10/14/2011 5:26:00 PM

    Kind of reminds me that just when I think I know myself, fate deals a different hand. Your grasp on human nature is so well expressed in your rhyme.

    BURKE Avatar CLAIRE BURKE Date: 10/24/2011 5:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much for your kind comment, I wanted to do something different and deep plus I am studying to become a psychologist so I think a lot and am learning lots of unthought things too. Thank you x