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  1. Date: 2/26/2013 12:44:00 PM
    Yasmin, I like how you would teach the angel of death procrastination. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 8:59:00 AM
    Well thought out and I couldn't agree more!!

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 3:16:00 AM
    A very good poem to send to the contest and you won! - Congratulations! - Have a lovely new week! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 9:34:00 PM
    Yasmin, , thank you for SUPPORTING MY NEWEST contest...CONGRATULATIONS on your awesome win ;-) LINDA

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 1:36:00 PM
    love it Yasmin,keep going,going,going,great write

  1. Date: 7/4/2012 11:25:00 AM
    Yas, I would think the last thing you need is beatifiaction, but I like the strong message in this ..David

  1. Date: 12/9/2011 12:46:00 AM
    Outstanding..... beautifully said just too real and expressed perfectly from the heart.

  1. Date: 11/27/2011 9:22:00 AM
    Wow! Amazing mashAllah :)

  1. Date: 10/23/2011 2:38:00 PM
    If you still can't find it I soup mailed it to you...

  1. Date: 10/23/2011 7:38:00 AM
    This is a sad but such an insightful profound write on a subject that most are so scared of.... Your comment on "Wilted Beauty" is a poem in itself.. you should write about that.... luv Michael

  1. Date: 10/1/2011 12:04:00 PM
    really enjoyed this khan, quite a gud way of lookin at death and dieying

  1. Date: 9/30/2011 4:41:00 PM
    Hi Yasmin, writing on death...insightful one .Enjoyed...

  1. Date: 9/30/2011 3:01:00 PM
    A thought-provoking poem. None of us know how long we have on this earth, and it is just as well, I think. Hope you are well. xoxo Robert. --Soupmail!

  1. Date: 9/30/2011 10:49:00 AM
    This a very tell tale introspective poem. Yasmin I hope indeed that when your time comes you are surrounded by family at home. Still I hope you have many more years for your poetry is touching

  1. Date: 9/28/2011 9:01:00 PM
    As a nurse, I've accompanied a few on the trip and found it to mostly be a peaceful affair taken with acceptance. This verse is full of insight and very special to me.

  1. Date: 9/28/2011 8:16:00 AM
    Sad but yet beautiful writing Yasmin. May God bless you with many more years my friend. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/27/2011 2:55:00 PM
    Let's just hope that you will live to a ripe old age, and not have to endure all of trials you wrote about. In fact, just think of green meadows, blue skies and bubbling brooks, and be happy and sstay well.

  1. Date: 9/27/2011 11:43:00 AM
    OHHH yikes you are not sick are you??? But I'm with you on the death bed thing? So glad to see you back writing! Light & love

  1. Date: 9/27/2011 9:25:00 AM
    This is really good....Beatuful i think! Keep up the good work!