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Something More

Something in your face
something kind and warm
and something with a trace 
of sexy 
like the rain in an excitable storm
Something in your words
and in the lines of what's unsaid 
drew me to you 
like a  ball of string or thread
something to unravel
a mystery in your eyes
something exciting, a sweet surprise
So hold the cup, take a sip 
taste the sweetness of friendship 
I'd like to know what makes you tick
and all there is to know
but hunnie there is no rush, 
So let's just take it slow


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  1. Date: 12/2/2012 1:59:00 AM

    Like it alot well done

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 9:14:00 AM

    love it allie!! hope all is well! wishing you return soon <3

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 3:04:00 PM

    Such tongue in cheek is marvelous! Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 5:14:00 PM

    How adorable! I very much liked this poem! It spoke to me, and it was over all just fantastic. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 3/28/2012 2:47:00 PM

    Wow....very well written Allie. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 9/24/2011 12:02:00 PM

    I like it. I hope you will enter it in Nette's sensual contest. I think it speaks loudly so. Love, Vie

  1. Date: 9/24/2011 10:20:00 AM

    You hum & I'll sing it... thanks Tony

  1. Date: 9/24/2011 9:45:00 AM

    It sounds like a song to me. Tony