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Punisher

Often bullied, more often tried
In darkest hours, never cried
Endless encounters with hope died
On steepest odds, yet never shied

I welcome abuse, give it your best
Hunt like a dog, squish like a pest
All this while, I take my rest
Until forebearance comes to test

For then, you must answer for your screwing
Ponder upon all of your doing
Ignorance is bliss, so is your unknowing
Where I shall take you, no one loves going

Do not take me for where I lie
For my colours deceive the brightest sky
Your pestering shall render your end nigh
(Be warned) There is more to me than meets the eye

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  1. Date: 9/7/2012 6:14:00 PM

    Hi Hussain, so nice to hear from you and I'm ecstatic you are getting "in the mood" again! It will be wonderful to read something new from you but your old ones are still nice to read too. Wonder how you are and hope life is treating you well. I bought an electric bike and am having a ball on it! Love, Lizzie

  1. Date: 5/9/2012 12:51:00 PM

    I am trying to catch up some on my thank you's to all the wonderful poets who have left kind comments on my writings. I thank you so much for your words of kindness M. Hussain. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope you are having a wonderful day. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/27/2012 9:39:00 AM

    Oh my god, I didn't mean all that I did ok! I didn't even know it'd hurt you that badly, honest. I'm so sorry for offending you. This brilliantly rhymed poem scared the living daylights outta me man. How do you plan on avenging my ridicule? Please spare me... Pretty please (whimpers) (sobs). Regards and Profuse Apologies, Crabbe The Bully

  1. Date: 11/17/2011 4:54:00 PM

    We who mess up deserve the correction. How are you luv, hope all is well with you!

  1. Date: 10/30/2011 7:29:00 PM

    Great! Very awesom write -- as of all I have come across so far. So intense, I like. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 10/26/2011 12:51:00 PM

    A warning - tread lightly. Yes, and there is more to everyone than meets the eye. Great write. LOve, daver

  1. Date: 10/23/2011 12:49:00 PM

    wow! H... i think you hit my feeling here.... and yes.. one can always put up a front of pretending ... love your poem.. I will match your poem with my depression poem tomorrow.. hope to see you stop by my work tomorrow... and by the way.. hehhe.. the last two writes of mine are only for this holiday.. take care,..p.d.

  1. Date: 10/21/2011 10:06:00 AM

    Hi Hussain, Always need to come and see what you are doing and love reading you all over again.

  1. Date: 10/14/2011 5:28:00 PM

    I detect a beware sign by one who has reached his limit. Dramatic, to be sure. Thanks for reading my stuff. Love, daver

  1. Date: 10/1/2011 10:59:00 PM

    Are you getting less frustrated these days? Your dark mood needs to be lightened and I'm trying to help!

  1. Date: 10/1/2011 4:50:00 PM

    Hussain, You have Soup Mail!

  1. Date: 9/28/2011 8:12:00 PM

    So come on now, get up to speed!

  1. Date: 9/28/2011 8:11:00 PM

    That last line is more than true for I find you a fascinating guy - and love your rhyming. Find some inspiration dear friend. Need to read your lovely creed! :)

  1. Date: 9/26/2011 3:00:00 PM

    Hussain: I'm sure glad I'm not the girl on the receiving end of this one (LOL) but very nicely penned! And I hope your frustrations are more imaginative than real but sometimes poetry can be a wonderful outlet for those "penned up" emotions that instead of releasing as anger we poets release in more creative ways. In sum, poetry is our release and our refuge. Anyway, GREAT poem and thanks 4 commenting on my poetry as well. You're far too kind with the compliments:)

  1. Date: 9/24/2011 1:22:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading this one..Reads like you are a very strong individual..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

  1. Date: 9/23/2011 6:36:00 PM

    I think you really challenged yourself in this. Difficult to find 4 words to fit and make sense in a ryhme but you did a great job. Soup mail for you

  1. Date: 9/23/2011 5:59:00 PM

    steps back.. looks.. dangarooni, dude, what got under your skin? lol, been there.. pretty recently in fact.. backed the offender down and am back to peaceful coexistence (tho i've no desire to hang out with him) lotta power in them words. Nice write, Hussain, write on! Beauty day~N

  1. Date: 9/23/2011 4:32:00 PM

    deeply intense lines Hussain with a perfect insight to character and values luv.. nicely penned with great fervor..thankxx for your wonderful comments on my poetry.. we are moving so time escapes me to reply quickly luv.. enjoy weekend..