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Memories

A memory surfaces in the form of a thick red liquid, i look closer and find the source and it is the girl, the girl who took her last breath but never stopped living

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  1. Date: 10/5/2011 5:21:00 PM

    Great writing, i love the intensity of the last line.

  1. Date: 9/27/2011 9:28:00 AM

    I am stopping by your wonderful poetry today to thank you for your kind comments on my writing Ethan. Hope you have an inspiration filled week. Love, Carol