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This ain't working
The cogs r sputtering while wheels r jerking 
Turning
Vibrating shaking the whole structure into a mold of worthless
A cause worth more than a few lbs of clouds drizzled with crushed gold dust inner lined with tranquillity
Silly of me
Thinking it was so easy
It's hard so applause is not needed
Smiles r receded
Judgement n criticism bestowed upon thee
Becuz its one that's seen
Not 3
Not 2
Just 1 with busted feet
Holes in teeth
Face be shaved just to grin out lies as speech
Let their eyes see n mouths preach hypocrisy
Let them.......Peace

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