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Look

Look at him
Look at what you did
Are you satisfied with your work?
Are you satisfied that he won't be able to love again?
Look
He sits there
Never saying a word

Thanks to you
He sits there
Broken hearted
Denying the agony you put him through
Look
At your work
At the treacherous lost
You have now inspired
To transpire true
Look 

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  1. Date: 9/21/2011 9:59:00 PM

    i feel like you wrote for me

    Uchacz Avatar Summer Uchacz Date: 9/22/2011 9:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Awe, not to be nosey and i know it's none of my buisness, but did you have a bad experience? i wrote this poem from my point of view on what i think would happen with a guy,