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Musical Entities

At the top of this mountain
My heart pounding
Aware of all i possess
Once upon a time in vacancy land,
I close this book,
It's last words read,
The power,
I watch as the waves spread
Layering over the crowd
Suffocating us all within unity
The ground shakes
As i lye here
Ants colonizing over the surface of my flesh
Dependent opon the vibrations of my skin
Sand sinking further in my back
Golden braids blend with the light
The grass reveals orange
Illuminiscent beauty,
A land once vacant,
Now taken over by the power of sound
The waves descend,
Ascending farther past this plain
Clouds breathing
Whispering echoes heard from this surface
Over and over,
Once again,
We are counting on this feel
We are losing the hours into the night
The full moon beams patterns
Never seen before,
Only to be cherished for this night
This moment in reality,
A body of vibrations
With ties so loosely,
Woven in and out of structures
Between the buried and me,
We remain threads of certainty,
In this moment,
Dependent on one another,
Through the body of the greater
The body of the ocean,
Counting on us to voice peaceful serenity
To accomodate the loss some of us have never found
I watch as stars fall on my face
Burning my mind, for all that i once knew before
Rising to greet the occassion,
The waves pick me up and guide me through the music

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  1. Date: 3/5/2012 6:04:00 AM
    Absolutely massive piece. Roller coaster ride here. Initially, I'd have like to have seen these lines broke up into stanzas. But your first line, "at the top of this mountain", justified the mood & direction in this piece....up & downhill. Fantastic.

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 11:50:00 AM
    These may be thoughts disturbing a much needed meditation, or contemplation. "The waves pick me up and guide me through the music." Maybe the sensation arrived when once free of the body, eh? So, your piece is very well worth a try. Love, daver