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Enlightenment

Shadow shrouds humanity
lunar-false reality
moonlight's slanting distortions
silvery warpings.

Mankind's dark veils dissolving
insight lighting clouded minds
truth imparting love to hearts
hopeful horizons.

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    The Situation
    Date: 9/28/2012 6:21:00 PM
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    When the dark viel desolves and the truth is shown. And bright promises come true. While dim light gets brighter. There is a place called Enlightenment.
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    Chris D. Aechtner
    Date: 12/28/2011 10:03:00 AM
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    Heya Charlotte, blessings towards a prosperous New Year! This is a thought-provoking poem filled with hope. Congratulations on your win in Debbie's contest!
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 12/28/2011 5:21:00 AM
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    Congratulations Charlotte. Love, Carol
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 12/27/2011 8:07:00 PM
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    Love that hopeful horizons, Charlotte. Good dodoitsu from you. Congrats on your win.
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 12/27/2011 3:43:00 PM
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    I enjoyed the juxtaposition of thought in this layered write, this is written by a deep deep thinker! Congrad's Light & Love
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 9/25/2011 12:09:00 PM
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    Congratulations on your win in the contest of Tracie "Dodoitsu Darkness" Charlotte. Love, Carol
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 9/23/2011 2:25:00 PM
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    Congrats on your creative work win..Sara
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 9/22/2011 10:22:00 PM
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    congratulations on your win, my dear and thanks for your encouraging words on my writing.
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 9/22/2011 5:11:00 PM
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    Congrats Charlotte on super second place win with lovely lines of poetry luv..
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    Dr.Ram Mehta
    Date: 9/22/2011 4:35:00 AM
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    Conmgratulations on the win in the contest of tracie,Charlotte
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    Red Fiery
    Date: 9/21/2011 3:19:00 PM
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    Your poems are definately a graet piece of art Charlotte..I find wisdom in ur words ...u have a beautiful heart[ thanx for ur wishes ]
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    Gwendolen R.
    Date: 9/20/2011 7:05:00 AM
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    Char~What a fantastic image you penned from the photo. The ending is picturesque and ties a pretty bow on your work. Just love it! Gwendolen
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 9/20/2011 1:33:00 AM
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    I really loved the second part. WE all could use a lot of hope.I am in a rush tonight; otherwise, I'd check out those other things you said to me. remind me tomorrow. Luv ya, andrea
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    Susan Buchel
    Date: 9/19/2011 6:46:00 PM
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    Me likey this a-one!
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    Russell Sivey
    Date: 9/19/2011 5:45:00 PM
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    What a wonderful write Charlotte! It fits the picture masterfully-I really enjoyed reading it! Awesome poem!!