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The Long Wait

soft moonlight kisses her cheek
cool night air gives a caress
she stands alone in shadow
some day he will come



for Tracie's contest

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  1. Date: 11/18/2011 11:33:00 AM

    Thank you for your kind comments Steven. Have a wonderful weekend. Live, Love, and Laugh. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/12/2011 8:51:00 PM

    I love this one, Steven. Is this contest already judged? I see you posted this a while back. Thanks for your comment today. Luv, Andrea

    Mossburg Avatar Steven Mossburg Date: 11/13/2011 1:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It was judged awhile back. It was for the Doditsu contest in which your poem (Hopeless Romantic") tied for first. This was my first and only Doditsu. I will have to try some more soon. It was fun and challanging to write. Thanks for your comment.
  1. Date: 11/12/2011 7:38:00 PM

    and he'll be a werewolf in disguise....ha ha. Just kidding..... I do like the waiting for the perrrrfect one to come along. Nature is entertaining her until "he" arrives. Enjoyed, Steven. Gwendolen

  1. Date: 9/19/2011 5:42:00 PM

    great dodoitsu p.d.