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Butt Man

A boob man I could be.
Yours do titillate me,  
so jiggly and bouncy. 
The two of them and me,
a love triangle we.

But your butt's what sends me 
skyward.  My ecstasy 
comes when I get to see 
that vertical cleft be 
creased horizontally.  

Those two mounds' little 'v' 
that sits like a cherry 
on a Sundae ought be 
against some law.  A 'Pee- 
ping Tom' it entraps me. 
 
Odd parts entice.  Dimply 
knees charm, and those curvy 
flanks get me all squeezie. 
But you bent overly; 
Wow! That's pure poetry. 


*2nd place in F Hererra's contest 'Erotica' 11/30/11.    

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  1. Date: 11/5/2011 10:49:00 PM

    ;-) CONGRATULATIONS, ON YOUR WIN~ Have a wonderful weekend, GOD BLESS,..p.d.

  1. Date: 11/3/2011 3:36:00 AM

    Congratulations on the win with this lovely write, John

  1. Date: 11/2/2011 10:41:00 PM

    way to go. This fun one won!! The ending is pure genius!

  1. Date: 11/2/2011 5:40:00 PM

    As Nancy says dig ya daddio, cut to the chase above below, us little animals need the fix, of boobs n tubes n bellatrix? sidetracked by the thoughts , affixed...

    Smith Avatar John Smith Date: 11/2/2011 6:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Delightful thoughts
  1. Date: 11/2/2011 4:40:00 PM

    i've just self-censored everything was gonna say... so will just say WAY GLAD this po place this way! Digya, John Smith~Nancy Jones

    Smith Avatar John Smith Date: 11/2/2011 6:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey, don't censor; soup mail.
  1. Date: 11/2/2011 10:24:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Frank's "Erotica" contest John. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/2/2011 10:08:00 AM

    super congrats John on another big win luv..

  1. Date: 10/1/2011 11:25:00 PM

    It was as much fun reading the comments as the poem John, you sure incite a lot of interest in these things you write. Let's never put a damper on your wicked mind. haha

  1. Date: 9/27/2011 11:30:00 PM

    I'm a butt man myself. I find this poem humorous. I truly enjoyed it. If you had a poem called boob dude i wonder what that would say

    Smith Avatar John Smith Date: 9/28/2011 12:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    There was a lewd, crude boob dude who'd chewed too hard on her nude... You'll have to finish this. I'm spinning out of control.
  1. Date: 9/18/2011 9:14:00 AM

    LOL, love this witty piece

  1. Date: 9/18/2011 4:29:00 AM

    I'm with ya here--Do you remember them skirts the gals use to wear in school a way back then--kinda tight all the way to the knees --than a flaring out--loved the backside motion!! Two soft cuddly kittens fighting in a silk slip as she walks across a source of light--Is Also a delight!! I better go shower now-- cold one for sure.

  1. Date: 9/18/2011 1:33:00 AM

    wow...love this one..i will have to share this one with the hubby i'm sure he will enjoy this...lol....smiles...chiquita

  1. Date: 9/16/2011 6:33:00 PM

    shake your groove thang then... lol!~n

  1. Date: 9/15/2011 10:51:00 PM

    hahaha. YOu and Frank are both butt guys! YOu could enter this possibly in the unmentionable contest? heehee. Nice to see you got a new one posted! It was great fun to read.

  1. Date: 9/15/2011 4:43:00 PM

    Racy work..Thanks for stopping by..Yes, rural has its benefits as does the city..To each person there are choices..Sometimes it is do I get a job and earn a living or not...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

  1. Date: 9/15/2011 9:30:00 AM

    Oh Joh, A captivating look into the mind of a pure romantic. Now I'm getting to know you better you naught boy! Love this triangle of curves.

  1. Date: 9/15/2011 7:50:00 AM

    Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today John. Let the words continue to flow from your pen. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/14/2011 8:58:00 PM

    finally poetry my husband loves, lol! he is a butt man too :P

    Smith Avatar John Smith Date: 9/15/2011 4:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm so glad there are two of us.
  1. Date: 9/14/2011 6:46:00 PM

    the passion for the lovely pit, the breasts from heaven calmy sit, the combination makes me sweat a bit, but then i'm being childish ...it tit tit:)

  1. Date: 9/14/2011 4:44:00 PM

    John this is cleverly crafted and delightfully funny expressing the truth of feelings luv.. my hubby is not an A man but he does luv those top mounds much..haha.. great read..luv..