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  1. Date: 9/16/2011 1:38:00 PM
    I like your style my friend! Have a peaceful day filled with blessings! CR

  1. Date: 9/16/2011 1:11:00 PM
    I think I can relate to this, David! very well said :) enjoyed your etheree-- wish you the best in the contest!

  1. Date: 9/14/2011 9:52:00 AM
    Wonderful poem David, I like it that way at work, just let me do my job, and go home~~ Love, Dear Heart

  1. Date: 9/14/2011 7:32:00 AM
    I can empathise with that, you've expressed you feeling very well, nice piece - good luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 9/14/2011 1:47:00 AM
    well nothing wrong with that David.. excellent and honest write .. stating very definite your opinion and theory luv.. good luck in the contest...

  1. Date: 9/13/2011 9:58:00 PM
    Hey, yours is too easy. I wish I could think of something like this, but unfortunately, I'm among the congregations that thrive for spotlight. haha. I honestly cannot think of anything unmentionable that I could dare write a poem about!! eeeek, I don't think I cando this contest. YOu did GREAT.

  1. Date: 9/12/2011 10:17:00 PM
    nice take on it David. One learns alot that way

  1. Date: 9/12/2011 6:29:00 PM
    Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading your work about you..This can be a good trait..You can be the wind beneath someone's wings...Your kind review of my work was uplifting..Yes, the children playing was a joyous day...Sara

  1. Date: 9/12/2011 6:18:00 PM
    me too....I am a wall paper flower. except on the soup.