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Poison

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Poison

Black water
Enters the system
Leaves decay

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  1. Date: 12/15/2011 10:15:00 PM
    Great one! Keep writing! :) Always, Laura

  1. Date: 10/25/2011 7:45:00 AM
    This is a powerful haiku. What is the "Black Water" a metaphor for? As to my poem I think I was trying to show that lepoards don's change their spots just like that. I don't condone piracy but I do like reading novels about it. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 10/23/2011 12:53:00 PM
    our world,, slipping in to a system of death... love your senryu... and thank you for your comments.. always,..p.d.

  1. Date: 9/21/2011 7:41:00 PM
    We have a wild storm here tonight and the black night water is indeed ripping the leaves off. Great description of a storm Hussain. Hope you can post soon, I'm on the third time around reading!

  1. Date: 9/19/2011 2:39:00 PM
    Interesting penned work..Sara

  1. Date: 9/16/2011 1:45:00 PM
    I gather you refer to the notorious Black Water Agence with questionable operations globally. I have read some research material on them and I must say your poetry describes them spot on! Very good write with a moral from it for us all.

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    Date: 9/19/2011 10:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    wanna check out this ref... so little money, so little time...
  1. Date: 9/16/2011 12:42:00 PM
    Hey Hussain, diggin' your stuff, especially like this one. Thanks for stopping by earlier and commenting. I added a coupla vids to the "about this poem" click on my hicks and oreilly poem if you're interested. Happy day~N

  1. Date: 9/13/2011 4:12:00 PM
    Superb lines of expression and an ultra cool title M. Hussain.... visuals beyond compare.. thankxx for enjoying my contest entry.. the photo on John's blog is gorgeous to view luv..

  1. Date: 9/12/2011 1:27:00 PM
    A lovely Senryu, Hussain, I am impressed. Thanks for stopping by to read my poem. I am grateful to you for your comments.