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Unbreakable

You are the wild grass growing between the sidewalk crack.
The support you need rests on my sturdy, rugged back.
I am the peak sheltering you from flashing thunderstorms.
The path we walk, I will clear of thistles and sharp thorns.
Life's meaning is clear when shared with an eternal friend.
And time will know about our unbreakable strength.
Worry not about the wirlwind of the past.
Rough surfaces will no longer last.
As I promise you a peaceful tomorrow.
By drinking the bitter ocean of yeserday's sorrow.



Co-written by Wayne Hill and Smriti Jha

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  1. Date: 11/1/2011 2:46:00 PM

    Great collaboration.

  1. Date: 9/21/2011 10:17:00 AM

    Congratulations on your co-write win in Tracie's "Grab A Mate" contest Wayne. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/16/2011 3:37:00 PM

    A seamless write. congratulations on your win w/Smriti :)

  1. Date: 9/16/2011 2:04:00 PM

    Time is sure sign of strength. Especially the diamonds afterglow. Congrats. on your first place win Wayne. Love, Vie

  1. Date: 9/16/2011 5:07:00 AM

    well done, A sturdy rock to lean on. congratulations... Marg

  1. Date: 9/15/2011 9:27:00 PM

    lovely sentiment Congrad's light & love

  1. Date: 9/15/2011 8:58:00 PM

    Congratulations on a worthy win with this beautiful tribute to friendship. Joyce

  1. Date: 9/15/2011 8:46:00 PM

    Hooray for you!! This is a wonderful poem of a wonderful friendship!! Well done!!

  1. Date: 9/15/2011 8:43:00 PM

    Congrats on your 1st place win in my contest with this breath taking poem xxx much luv

  1. Date: 9/15/2011 7:48:00 PM

    Congrats Wayne on first place win with this collaboration luv.. awesome piece..

  1. Date: 9/11/2011 5:46:00 PM

    nice

  1. Date: 9/11/2011 4:31:00 PM

    nice piece,you guys did a good job.