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Fine Line

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Below is the poem entitled Fine Line which was written by poet Pat McCoy. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Fine Line

What is your drug of choice,if one is had.Booze,weed or LSD,cocaine,speed or PCP!There are many that we do but this crap is not good for you.
Nothing to gain for scars I bare but drink and crap my underwear!
Snort a line,what can I do,keep snorting until my face turns blue!
Pop a lid and watch me fly and watch the wall melt while I fry!
Puff a blunt,I feel just fine until I lose all track of time!
One teaspoon of dust inside my wine and I go swimming with the swine!
Oxycoten is not for me when I have got the need for speed!
Now I bounce back off the wall because I hear a special call!
That call is called reality,it screams this will be the end of me!
What choice is there when life is hard and I am dealing my last card!
Get off my ass and out of bed and if I fail I end up dead!

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  1. Date: 9/11/2011 4:06:00 PM
    beautiful

    McCoy Avatar Pat McCoy
    Date: 9/12/2011 1:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!!
  1. Date: 9/11/2011 3:46:00 PM
    Everyone has choices..Drugs are a dead end path..Good to read your work..I feel that the last line says that you rejected the idea of using illegal substances..Sara

    McCoy Avatar Pat McCoy
    Date: 9/12/2011 1:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    That is the truth of the matter and I am blessed to have survived some experiences which could have went the wrong way and yes I have become more aware and no longer indulge in any chemicals though I may partake in a blunt or two when I have nothing important to accomplish!!Thank you very much for your veiws and feedback as it is much appreciated!!